01 选择类-四个APP选择 (作文深度点评).docx

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随着移动网络的发展，各种手机APP应运而生，给我们的生活带来了极大便利，但许多同学也因此沉迷网络。现学生会发起一项清理手机APP的倡议，如果你只能从以下四个APPs：WeChat，Taobao，E-dictionary，GloryofKings(mobilegame)中保留两个，你会如何选择，并说明理由。

第一段

交代背景

Intheeraof…,…havebroughtgreatconveniencetoourlife.However,howtomakegooduseofappswithout…isapressingissue.Ihaveheardthatthereisanongoinginitiativecallingon…todo…

Withthetremendousadvanceofmobilenetworks,recentyearshavewitnessednumerousAppsfindingtheirwaytoourlife.However,quiteafewstudentsfallvictimto…

Withtherapiddevelopmentofmobilenetwork,manyAPPsonmobilephoneshavebeenemerging,bringinggreatconvenience…However,manystudentscannotresistthetemptationofthenetwork,thuscausing…

Withthepopularityofapps,ourlifehasbeengreatlyinfluenced.Convenientastheyare,someofusaregrowingtooobsessedwiththem.Facedwiththesituation,Iamgladtoseethestudents’UnionputforwardaproposalofcleaningtheAppsonmobilephones.

Nowadays,duetothepopularityofmobilephones,variousAppshavesprunguplikemushrooms.

表明选择

Among…,Irecommendthatweshouldonlyuse…

Tohelpstudentshaveamoresensiblechoice,IstronglysuggestonlyWeChatandE-dictionaryshouldstayinourphones.

Wereitleftmetodecide,I’dliketounload…andkeep…

AmongtheourAPPsmentioned,I’llchoosetoreserveWeChatandE-dictionary.

IfIcanonlykeeptwoapplicationsoutoftheWeChat,E-dictionary,TaobaoandGloryofKings,Iwouldchoosethefirsttwo.

第二段

第三段

（可以保留的理由分2-3段，也可保留的理由一段，去除的理由一段）

保留理由

Comparedwiththerest,E-dictionaryisthemosthelpfulinlearning.

WhileE-dictionarymakesstudyeasier,WeChatoffersusamorecolorfulsociallife.

Tobeginwith,E-dictionaryiscertainlyamulti-functionapplicationwhichisidealforpersonalstudying.

WhatisworthmentioningisthatGloryofKings,acontroversialapplication,shouldn’tbebanned.

Tostartwith,…shouldbeinlinewithouri