01 推荐信-汉语课程(作文深度点评) .docx

推荐信——选择对比——?汉语课程?

上海高考

假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，收到外国朋友Bill的邮件，告诉你他准备开始学习汉语，现有两门汉语课程供他选择（课程信息下表所示），但他对课程选择有些茫然，想听取你的建议。给Bill?回复一封邮件，在邮件中你必须：

推荐其中一门课程

通过比较两门课程的信息，说明你推荐该门课程的理由。

课程名称

汉语听说

汉语读写

课程内容

日常会话

故事读写

授课安排

每周一、四

晚7:00-8:30，共8周

每周五

晚7:00-8:30，共16周

授课语言

全中文

中英双语

一、框架梳理

交代背景

（问候语+写信的目的）

Iveheardthat…

Iamexcited/thrilled/delightedtohearfrom…

Hearingthat…Ihighlyrecommend…

…youarepreparingto…andtherearetwocoursesforyoutochoosefrom…

…youaregoingtolearnChinesebutthatyouarefacingatoughchoice,Iamwritingtoyoutosharemyhumbleopinions.

…youaretornbetweentwocourses…I’dliketovoicemyrecommendation.

…youarepreparingtolearnChinesebutareatacompletelossaboutwhichcoursetotake,Icanhardlywaittowritethise-mailtoyou,sharingmyopinions.

SoelatedamIthatI’vereceivedyoure-mailwhereyoumentionedthatyouhavebeenpreparingforlearningChinese,butthealternativesofcurriculumstillconfusedyouandmadeyouhesitant.

表明选择

（推荐其中一门课程）

AccordingtomyexperienceasanEnglishlearner.Iwouldadviseyouto…

IfIwereyou,Iwouldenterfor…ratherthan…

Aftercarefulcomparisonbetweenthetwocoursesandtakingintoconsiderationyourpersonalsituation,Ibelieve…ismoresuitableforyou.

Allthingsconsidered,Istronglyrecommendyoutochoose…

Considering…,…canbettersatisfyyourrequirementsthan….

Between…and…,Imaintainthattheformerismoresuitableforyouandtherecommendationwillbejustifiedasthefollowingreasons.

Basedonyourpersonalsituation,IconsidertheChineselisteningandspeakingcourseisabetterchoiceforyou.

选择理由（比较两门课程的信息）

Firstandforemost,Ibelievethatitscontent,whichmainlyincludesreadingandwritingstories,mayarouseyourinterestinChinese.

First,comparedtoreadingandwriting,listeningandspeakingiseasierandmoreusefulindailylife.

Meanwhile,Audio-OralChinesestandsoutwithitsgoodpaceforanovicelikeyou.

Second,th