02 征文投稿-冲突经历(作文深度点评) .docx

征文投稿——夹叙夹议——冲突经历

（2021届杨浦一模）

红星中学为了创建文明校园，促进和谐社会，举办题为“ConflictManagement”的征文比赛。假定你是李林，请给校报投稿，你的文章需包括：

1）你亲身经历的最严重或令你最难忘的冲突；

2）你对处理冲突的反思或从中学到的经验教训。

一、框架梳理

引出话题

Wheretherearepeople,thereis...

…iscommonindailylife.

Howtodealwith…isundoubtedlyamatterofgreatimportancetous.

Itscommonforeveryoneto…indailylife.

Ourlifeisfullofvarious…andsomeofthemcan’tbeavoided.Soitis

importantforustolearntohowtodealwiththem,ortheymaycausealotoftroubles.

As?members?of?the?society,?we?all?interact?with?other?individuals?in?our?life.?So?it

comesasnosurprisethatwewillallinevitablymeetwith…

Howtohandle…isavitalquestioninmakingaharmoniouscampus.

Everyonehasexperienced…,and…areespeciallycommoninschoollife.

Lifeisfullof…andweshouldn’tdealwiththeminapassiveway.

叙述经历

Takemyselfasanexample.

Themostunforgettableexperiencewas…

The?most?…?I?experienced?myself?might?bethe?one?…

Once,?I?myself?was?involved?in?...?It?started?with...andfinally...

The?most?unforgettable?…?that?had?ever?happened?to?me?was…

Inmymemory,themost…Iexperiencedpersonallymaybe…

Itwasasifcoldwaterhadbeenpouredovermyhead.

反思/教训

Thebestway(s)to…is(are)….

From?it,?I?have?learned?many?valuable?lessons.??First?and?foremost…?

…,some…canbesolvedwithourpatienceandtolerance.

Afterwards,havingreflectedonmyself,IdrewlessonsfromthisexperienceandtherewerereallyseveralthingsthatIcouldhavedonebetter…

To?see?it?from?another?angle,…

This…does?offer?me?plenty?of?foods?for?thought.

WhatIlearnedfromthe…isthat...

Learningfromthelesson,Ireflectedonmyselfthat…

Harkingbacktotheconflict,Irealizethequestionishowtonegotiatewhendivergenceappeared.

Ihavelearntalotfromthisexperience.

总结

Ihopemyexperiencewillgiveyousomeinspirationwhenitcomesto…

Tosumup,…arebeneficialaslongaswelearntomana