读后续写：亲情在冲突中愈合、在陪伴中升华 讲义--高考英语备考写作专项 .pdf

读后续写：亲情在冲突中愈合、在陪伴中升华讲义

题目原文

AfterWalterBergenswifedied,hewasthrownintodeepsorrowandloneliness.

Hepaidnoattentiontoanything.Hishousefellintodisrepair,withdustgathering

everywhereanddirtydishespilingupinthesink.Hegaveupcookingandsurvivedon

TVdinnersandtoast.Hisclotheswentunwashed,andheneglectedhispersonalcare,

withashaggybeardandessyhair.

Hisdaughter,Melanie,wasextreelyworried.Shedrovetohishouseandpleaded,

Dad!Thisisntright.Youcantstayhere.Coelivewithus.〃ButWaltershotback

angrily,Idontwanttoliveinyourhouse.Tfine.Justleaveealone!Melanieleft,

herheartheavywithconcern.

Afewweekslater,WalterwalkedtothesuperarkettobuyhisusualTVdinners

andbread.Ashecrossedtheroad,hisindelsewhere,hedidntlookeitherway.A

carhithi,andanabulancerushedhitothehospital.Atthehospital,Melanie

exclaied,“Dad!Yourenotlivingaloneanyore.Yourecoingtoourhouse.”

Walter,weakanddefeated,finallyagreed.

AtMelanieshouse,herhusbandRogerwasntpleased.Yourfatherisdirtyand

alwaysinabadood.Whyishelivingwithus?”hecoplained.Melaniefirly

replied,“Hesyfather.Hesoldandheartbroken.Heneedstostay.Rogersighed

andsaid,“Iunderstand/

Rosa,MelanieandRogersdaughter,wasnineyearsold.Oneeveningduring

dinnerMelanieannounced,“Toorrow,RosasschoolhasGrandparentsDay.Walter,

curious,asked,“WhatsGrandparentsDay?”Melanieexplained,“Thechildrens

grandparentsvisittheschool,watchthekidsactivities,andplaygaeswiththe.

Itsreallyfun.Walterdeclared,“IRosasgrandfather.Illgo.Uponhearingthis,

Rosajupedup,rantoherrooandlockedherselfin.Laterthatnight,asWalterwas

abouttogotobedandwalkedpastRosasroo,h