高考英语-第三部分-写作导练案-第三讲-概要写作.pptxVIP

第三讲概要写作;典例展示;Thoughthebeliefinthemerit(好处)ofdirtwaslong-lived，dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18century.Scientificallyspeaking，cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease.Yet，itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWarⅡ.Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea:Clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite，clothseversofter，surfacestoshine.Hasthehatefordirt，however，gonetoofar?

Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt，whichmightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease.Onthecontrary，MaryRuebush，anAmericanimmunologist(免疫学家)，encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.Andthelatter(后者)positionisgainingsomeground.;【参考范文】

Peoplehavemixedopinionsaboutdirtonourskin.(关键点1)Foralongtimeinhistory，peopleofsomeEuropeancountriesbelievedthatdirtprotectedpeoplefromgettingill.(关键点2)However，peoplebegantochangetheirattitudestowardsdirtabout200yearsago.Peoplehavebeentoldthatwashingdirtoffourbodycankeepushealthy.(关键点3)Yet，somescientistsbelievethatexposuretosomedirtmayhelpourimmunesystem.(关键点4);一、审题;二、关键点分析

1.文章第一段就是本篇文章主题句，亮明了总观点：“However，thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.”换句话说：“Differentpeoplehavedifferentattitudestowardsdirt.”再结合下文谈到主题可知“Differentpeoplehavedifferentattitudestowardsdirtontheskin.”范文中关键点1“Peoplehavemixedopinionstowardsdirtonourskin.”概括非常精练。;2.第二段主要谈到了在16世纪，人们认为“dirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease”尤以英、法两国贵族为代表。结合第三段第一句“Thoughthebeliefinthemerit(好处)ofdirtwaslong－lived，dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18century.”可知，直到18世纪之前，人们都认为dirt是很“友好”，有利于预防疾病。范文中关键点2“Foralongtimeinhistory，peopleofsomeEuropeancountriesbelievedthatdirtprotec