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人生在勤,不索可获,人的一生就是不断耕耘与收获的过程。作为胸怀大志的青少年更应勤勤恳恳,努力学习与工作,就“Nopains,nogains”发表自己的观点与看法。篇章结构:拟关键词:审题构思:内容要点:构建句式:【素材示例】
Nopains,nogains【佳作播报】01Nogreatworkcanbeperformedwithouteffort.①Weenvyfamousmenandimaginethattheirfamewasduetoluck.Butwhenweknowtheirhistories,wefindthatitislongyearsofpatientworkandconstanteffortthathavebroughtabouttheirsuccess.Justaswecannotreachthetopofamountainwithoutclimbing,wecannotachievesuccesswithouteffortandhardwork.—ByJames02
Diligenceisthekeyfactorofsuccess.Diligencegiveseverymanandwoman,everyboyandgirl,properworktodo.Manymenhavebecomegreatbecauseoftheirhardship.Diligencecanmakeafoolwiseandapoormanrich.②Thus,weknowthatdiligenceisagoodthing.
Todonothingistobringruinupononeself.Idleness(懒惰)istherootofallevils.Manymenloveidleness.Theyeatdeliciousthingsandwearbeautifulclothes,andwastebothtimeandmoneyonpastimes.Suchamandoesnotknowhowtostudyandwork.Wehavemanyevilstoovercomeandmuchgoodtodo.Togetfruitfulresultswemustguardagainstidleness.
作者观点鲜明,语言生动,文章结构严谨,从各个侧面论证了没有耕耘就没有收获这一观点,文章长短句结合,并且运用了比喻等修辞手法。01高级词汇:perform,imagine,dueto,constant,achieve,overcome02过渡词语:Justas...,Thus等。03【赏文酌句】
经典句式:经典句式:①双重否定句:Nogreatworkcanbeperformedwithouteffort.②比喻句:Justaswecannotreachthetopofamountainwithoutclimbing,wecannotachievesuccesswithouteffortandhardwork.③谚语:Diligencecanmakeafoolwiseandapoormanrich.Idlenessistherootofallevils.
【佳句模拟】no/not...without...双重否定句[模拟]Nothingcouldlivewithoutwater.没有水什么也活不了。make+宾语+名词/形容词补足语[模拟]Whatyousaidmadehimsad.你说的话使他很难过。
佳句背诵佳句背诵Manygreatmenhaverisenfrompoverty—Lincoln,forexample/instance.许多伟人从贫困中崛起,例如林肯。Wherethereisawill,thereisaway
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