Micro-skills of continuation writing（续写微技能） --- Verbs “draw” pictures（课件）（以动词构建画面）.pptx

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whilewritingstories?;Activity1Somanyverbshere!;Focusontheverbsinblue

NeverhadIthoughtthisgreatexpedition(探险)withSirErnestShackletontotravelacrosstheAntarcticwouldendupinfailure.

Ourship,Endurance,wasstuckiniceandmonthslater,wascrushedbytheicearound.Beforeweabandonedtheship,Shackletontoldustorescueourmostessentialsupplies—thesmallboats,ourfood,thecookstove,candles,clothesandblankets.Noneofustookawayourpersonalbelongings,exceptabanjo(班卓琴)usuallyusedforpartiesandcelebrations.

Aftermonthsofstruggle,wefinallyarrivedatElephantIsland,butthingswentfrombadtoworse.Havingassessedthesituation,ShackletondecidedtoleaveustofindhelponSouthGeorgiaIsland-thisvoyagewastoodangerousanddifficultforallofustomakeitinoursmallboats.

Sotwenty-twosailors,includingme,watchedasShackletonandhisboatsailedaway,believinghewouldreturntosaveus.Holdinghandstogether,weallwalkedbacktoourtemporarycamp,promisingtoworktogether.;Focusontheverbsinblue

1)Ourship,Endurance,wasstuckiniceandmonthslater,wascrushedbytheicearound.Beforeweabandonedtheship,Shackletontoldustorescueourmostessentialsupplies-thesmallboats,ourfood,thecookstove,candles,clothesandblankets.

2)Sotwenty-twosailors,includingme,watchedasShackletonandhisboatsailedaway,believinghewouldreturntosaveus.Holdinghandstogether,weallwalkedbacktoourtemporarycamp,promisingtoworktogether.;Focusontheverbsinblue

1)Ourship,Endurance,wasstuckiniceandmonthslater,wascrushedbytheicearound.Beforeweabandonedtheship,Shackletontoldustorescueourmostessentialsupplies-thesmallboats,ourfood,thecookstove,candles,clothesandblankets.

2)Sotwenty-twosailors,includingme,watchedasShac