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couldbeaccessedbychildrenattooearlyageandwhiletheyhavenotsufficientexperience

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ThemainconcernissittingfrontofTVorPCscreenforlongtimeisdamagingdetrimentalto

children’sphysicalpostureandvision,whichmaycausetheseriouslyseriousphysical

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