人教版七年级下册英语精品教学课件 Unit 7 单元写作 (2).pptVIP

**单元写作单元写作记录难忘的一天Unit7ADaytoRemember写作维度本单元的写作任务是以日记的形式记录“难忘的一天”。一般有这样几个主题：学习交流促进成长的一天；与朋友或家人之间情感升华的一天；参加劳动感悟生活的一天等。呼应主题记录难忘的一天开篇点题事件要素：时间，地点，人物，事情发展等呼应主题黄金语料(从教材内外积累好句)开头段①Myfirsttimeto...isimportantforme.②IwillneverforgetthedaywhenI...forthefirsttime,becauseitisso...forme.③Istillrememberdoing...中间段①Ithappened...②ThereasonwhyIthinkitisunforgettableis...③ThesemagicwordstouchedmyheartandIwillneverforgetthem.④Afterastormcomesarainbow.⑤IstillrememberthedaylastsummerwhenIwentforapicnicwithmyfather.⑥Thereisnodoubtthatmyparents/teachers/friends...mealot...结尾段①ThiswassuchanunforgettableexperiencethatIwouldrememberitforever.②Thismomentwillbethemostpreciousmemoryformebecauseitmakesme...③Itwon’tbeforgottenbecauseitteachesme...经典例题(从经典例题中学会审题)假如你是李华，上周五你参加了学校组织的郊游活动。请你以“schooltrip”为主题，写一篇英语日记，内容包括参加活动的人员、集合时间、郊游地点、交通方式、活动内容以及个人感受等。审人称:第一人称审时态:一般过去时审主题:学校旅行审体裁:应用文（日记）要求：(1)70词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Friday,25OctoberOurclasswentonaschooltriplastFriday._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________精彩范文展示Friday,25OctoberOurclasswentonaschooltriplastFriday.Itwastiringbutgreatfun!WewenttotheNationalPark.Wemetattheschoolgateat7:30a.m.andwenttherebybus.First,weclimbedthemountain.教材原句:①Itwastiringbutgreatfun!(教材P54)Whenwewalkedalongthemountainroads,wecouldenjoythebeautifulflowers.Itwasreallyexciting.Whenwegottothetop,everyonejumpedupanddownwithgreatexcitement.Aftertwohours,wedecidedtogotothelake.Wewentfishingbythelake.Atnoon,wehadapicnicandenjoyedourselvesinthesunshine.Wesangsongs,dancedandflewkites.Wedidlovethefreshairandthebeautyofnature.Wetooklotsofpictures.Today