人教版七年级下册英语精品教学课件 Unit 4 写作能力提升练 (11).pptVIP

**写作实践话题写作常见错误呈现实战演练UNIT4写作能力提升练俗话说的好：“健康胜于财富”。为了倡导健康饮食，学校正在举办题为“如何健康饮食”的英文征文比赛。假如你是李华，请你围绕下面的写作要点，写一篇短文参加比赛。要点如下：1.你的饮食习惯（一日三餐，最喜欢的食物）。2.提出健康饮食的建议（至少2点）。3.呼吁大家要健康饮食。词数：80左右。［审题指导］1.体裁：说明文2.人称：第一人称3.时态：一般现在时［思路构建］Hello,everyone.I’mLiHua.Iwouldliketosharesomethingaboutmyeatinghabitswithyou.Ihavethreemealsaday.Inthemorning,Iliketohavesomedumplingsforbreakfast.Forlunch,Iofteneatriceandvegetables.Intheevening,Ihaveporridge.Ialsohavefruiteverydaybecauseit’sgoodformyhealth.Inmyopinion,weshouldtrytodevelophealthyeatinghabitstokeephealthy.Weshouldeatlessjunkfoodbecauseitisunhealthy.Wecanalsohavemorefruitandvegetables.Inordertokeephealthy,let’seathealthyfoodandstopeatingjunkfood.［精彩范文］1.本文条理清晰，围绕要点依次展开。2.because引导的原因状语从句，增加了文章可读性。3.begoodfor,inmyopinion,trytodo,stopdoing等短语的运用使文章更丰富精彩。4.inorderto用来表目的以及let’s...句式的使用，使文章更有号召力。高分点评：下面句子均有1-2处错误，请找出并写出正确的句子。1.Mysisterwouldlikehavebreadandeggforbreakfast. ________________________________________________Mysisterwouldliketohavebreadandeggsforbreakfast.2.Theboylikesbeefandcabbagesnoodlesverymuch. ____________________________________________3.Someofmyfriendsdon’tlikecarrotsandothervegetables. _____________________________________________________________Theboylikesbeefandcabbagenoodlesverymuch.Someofmyfriendsdontlikecarrotsorothervegetables.4.Eattoomanysweetthingsarebadforourhealth. ______________________________________________5.Tokeephealth,Ihavemilkandvegetableseveryday. _______________________________________________Eatingtoomanysweetthingsisbadforourhealth.Tokeephealthy,Ihavemilkandvegetableseveryday.假如你是李华，你校餐厅为使同学们吃得健康，提供了营养丰富的午餐。请你根据下列提示，给你在美国的网友Tina写一封邮件，与她分享你在校经常吃的午餐。写作要求：1.包含图片中的所有信息，适当表达你对这些食物的看法；2.80词左右（邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。提示词汇