人教版八年级上册英语精品教学课件 Unit 6 写作提优练.pptVIP

**写作提优练Unit6PlanforYourself写作提优练【写作导引】本单元以“拥有梦想，实现梦想”为话题，属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“自我完善”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①描述学习中遇到的具体困难；②制订和分享未来的计划。【写作任务】假如你是Nick，长大后你想成为一名科学家，制作不同的机器人。请你根据下面的思维导图，写一篇短文，描写你对未来的想象。Whatyourrobotsdo:Cleanthestreets,pickuptherubbishandplanttreesWheretowork:BeijingHowtomakeitcometrue:...MyDreamWhyyoumakerobots:Tohelpprotecttheenvironment要求：1.短文应包括思维导图中的所有信息，可适当发挥；2.词数：80左右。【精彩范文】I’mNick.Whatdoyouwanttobeinthefuture?Asforme,IwanttobeascientistwhenIgrowup1.5SoI’mgoingtostudyhard2togotoagooduniversityfirstandthenI’mgoingtostudysciencethere.ThenIwillworkinBeijing.ThereIwillmakemanyrobotsindifferentshapes3.Ithinktherewillbemorepollutioninthefuture,soIhopemyrobotswillhelppeopleprotecttheenvironmentandstopthepollution.6Theywillhelpcleanthestreets,pickuptherubbish4andplanttreesindifferentplaces.Ithinkpeoplewilllovethemverymuch.亮点词块1??growup长大2??studyhard努力学习3??indifferentshapes形态各异4??pickuptherubbish捡垃圾高分句子5??Asforme,IwanttobeascientistwhenIgrowup.(when引导时间状语从句)6??Ithinktherewillbemorepollutioninthefuture,soIhopemyrobotswillhelppeopleprotecttheenvironmentandstopthepollution.(宾语从句)跟踪演练假设你是何奇，你的梦想是成为一名医生。请根据提示，给你的朋友李华写一封邮件，告诉他你将如何实现自己的梦想。提示：1.getexcellentgrades2.focuson(专注于)scienceclasses3.improvethephysicalhealth要求：1.要点齐全，可适当发挥；2.?80词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。DearLiHua,I’vedecidedtobeadoctorwhenIgrowup.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________It’snoteasytobecomeadoctor,soImadeaplanforit.Firstly,togetintothebe