人教版八年级上册英语精品教学课件 Unit 6 写作提优练 (4).pptVIP

**写作提优练Unit6PlanforYourself写作提优练[写作导引]本单元以“拥有梦想,实现梦想”为话题,属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“自我完善”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①描述学习中遇到的具体困难;②制订和分享未来的计划。[写作任务]假如你是Nick,长大后你想成为一名科学家,制作不同的机器人。请你根据下面的思维导图,写一篇短文,描写你对未来的想象。要求：1.短文应包括思维导图中的所有信息,可适当发挥;2.词数：80左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________[精彩范文]I’mNick.Whatdoyouwanttobeinthefuture?Asforme,IwanttobeascientistwhenIgrowup①.⑤SoI’mgoingtostudyhard②togotoagooduniversityfirstandthenI’mgoingtostudysciencethere.ThenIwillworkinBeijing.ThereIwillmakemanyrobotsindifferentshapes③.Ithinktherewillbemorepollutioninthefuture,soIhopemyrobotswillhelppeopleprotecttheenvironmentandstopthepollution.⑥Theywillhelpcleanthestreets,pickuptherubbish④andplanttreesindifferentplaces.Ithinkpeoplewilllovethemverymuch.亮点词块①growup长大②studyhard努力学习③indifferentshapes形态各异④pickuptherubbish捡垃圾高分句子⑤Asforme,IwanttobeascientistwhenIgrowup.(when引导时间状语从句)⑥Ithinktherewillbemorepollutioninthefuture,soIhopemyrobotswillhelppeopleprotecttheenvironmentandstopthepollution.(宾语从句)跟踪演练假如你是何奇,你的梦想是成为一名医生。请根据提示,给你的朋友李华写一封邮件,告诉他你将如何实现自己的梦想。提示：1.getexcellentgrades2.focuson(专注于)scienceclasses3.improvethephysicalhealth要求：1.要点齐全,可适当发挥;2.80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。DearLiHua,I’vedecidedtobeadoctorwhenIgrowup.______________________________________________________________Whatareyougoingtodointhefuture?I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,HeQiDearLiHua,I’vedecidedtobeadoctorwhenIgrowup.It’snoteasytobecomeadoctor,soImakeaplanforit.Firstly,togetintothebestcollegeormedicalschool,Ineedtogetexcellentgrades.SoI’mgoingtostudyhardertogetbettergrades.Secondly,I’mgoingtofocusonscienceclassesbecausescienceisimportantfordoctors.Thi