人教版八年级下册英语精品教学课件 Unit 6 写作能力提升练 (5).pptVIP

UNIT6Anoldmantriedtomovethemountains写作能力提升练

假如你是李梅,请你根据下面所给图画，给大家讲述这一经典故事。SimaGuanghitthetank

［谋篇布局］理清文章要素，构建文章结构。

［遣词造句］就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。1.院里有一个大水缸。缸里盛满了水。Therewasalargewatertankintheyard.It__________________.2.他们正在玩时，一个孩子意外地掉进了水缸中。Whentheywereplaying,onechildaccidentally_________________________.wasfullofwaterfellintothewatertank

3.他想了想，然后有了一个主意。他捡起一块大石头，砸向那个水缸。He_______________andthenhadanidea.He____________________and_____________________.4.缸破了，水流出来了。那个孩子得救了。Thetankbrokeandthewaterranout.Thechild_________.pickedupabigstonethoughtitoverthrewitatthewatertankwassaved

［连句成篇］SimaGuanghitthetankOnceSimaGuangwasplayinghide-and-seekwithseveralchildreninthebackyard.Therewasalargewatertankintheyard.Itwasfullofwater.Whentheywereplaying,onechildaccidentallyfellintothewatertank.Otherchildrenweresofrightenedthattheystartedtocry,runningforhelp.However,SimaGuangwasdifferent.Hethoughtitoverandthenhadan

idea.Hepickedupabigstoneandthrewitatthewatertank.“Bang!”Thetankbrokeandthewaterranout.Thechildwassaved.Doyoulikethestory?WhatdoyouthinkofSimaGuang?高分点评:1.本文按时间顺序，运用连词when，so...that等交代故事发展。2.运用一系列表达动作的短语：fallinto,starttocry,runforhelp,thinkover,pickup,runout等，将故事发生的过程紧密相连。

同学们一定听过《守株待兔》的故事吧，请你根据图片和提示词，用英语描述这个故事并抒发自己的感悟。要求:不少于70词。提示词:hare野兔；hurriedly匆忙地；knockagainst撞上；lazy懒惰的；treestump树桩

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