人教版八年级下册英语精品教学课件 Unit 2 写作能力提升练 (2).pptVIP

**写作任务思路点拨写作实践UNIT2Illhelptocleanupthecityparks.写作能力提升练本单元的话题是“志愿服务及慈善活动”。写作体裁以记叙文为主，时态以一般过去时为主。写作时注意正确使用情态动词could及动词不定式结构。辽宁中考常见设题角度：介绍志愿服务及慈善活动的经历及感受。假如你是李华，上周日你和几位同学组建了一支志愿者小分队，去一所乡村学校服务。请根据下表内容写一篇英语短文，向你的英国朋友介绍你们的志愿活动。词数：80-100。时态：一般过去时人称：第一人称打扫学校，修理桌椅，赠送书籍和文具……时间上周日地点一所乡村学校人物你和几位同学活动打扫学校，修理桌椅，赠送书籍和文具……［思路点拨］理清文章要素，构建文章结构。［优秀范文］Ilikedoingvolunteerjobsbecausehelpingothersmakesmehappy.LastSunday,myclassmatesandIsetupavolunteerteamandwenttovolunteerinavillageschool.First,wecleaneduptheschoolandtheclassroomswiththestudents.Thenwehelpedfixupthebrokendesksandchairsintheclassrooms.Afterthat,wegaveawaybooksandschoolthingstothestudents.Tocheerthemup,wealsoplayedgameswiththem.Weallhadagreattime.Althoughweweretired,wefelthappytohelpthem.Ithinkweshouldlearntohelpthepeopleinneedandmakeadifferencetootherpeople’slives.高分点评：1.短文采用总—分—总结构，思路清晰。2.连接词first,then,afterthat使文章衔接自然，表达连贯流畅。3.短语setup,cleanup,fixup,giveaway及makeadifference的正确使用，使语言丰富、表达地道。4.although复合句的使用，展现作者扎实的语言运用能力，为短文的亮点和加分点。…DateMarch5thPlaceSunshineNursingHomeActivitiesdosomecleaning;putonshows;…Feeling(s)…DearDavid,Howiseverythinggoing?__________________________Yours,LiHua________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearDavid，Howiseverythinggoing?IdliketosharemywonderfulexperienceonMarch5thwithyou.Onthatday,aftermyclassmatesandIarrivedattheSunshineNursingHome,wedidsomecleaning,suchaswashingclothesandcleaningthefloorandthewindow