人教版八年级下册英语精品教学课件 Unit 5 写作能力提升练 (12).pptVIP

**写作任务思路点拨写作实践UNIT5Whatwereyoudoingwhentherainstormcame？UNIT5写作能力提升练假如近期你所在中学的校刊开辟了英文专栏，征集发生在大家身边的感人故事。请你根据以下提示，为该专栏投稿。要点提示：1.在一个寒冷的早晨，你买早餐时看到前面的女孩买了面包和牛奶；2.女孩要离开时，发现树下有一位老乞丐，他看上去很饿；3.女孩走到乞丐身旁，把食物递给了他；4.乞丐向女孩道谢，女孩微笑着离开；5.你很感动……参考词汇：乞丐beggar；感动bemoved［谋篇布局］理清文章要素，构建文章结构。交代时间、人物—时间：onacoldmorning人物：agirl;anoldbeggar 介绍事情的经过—wasgoingtoleave;found;hungry;cameupto;saidthanksto;smile介绍我的感受—wasmoved;decidedbuyingbreakfastbuysomebreadandmilk12345wasgoingtoleaveanoldbeggarunderatree12345cameuptohimgaveherbreakfasttohim12345saidthankstothegirlwentawaywithasmile12345wasmoved12345［巧妙衔接］简述事情时，用一般过去时和过去进行时。这两种时态配合使用可以建立起上下文的逻辑联系。全文按照事情的发展过程来描述，运用连词when或while，使文章过渡自然。［连句成篇］Onacoldmorning，whileIwasbuyingbreakfast，Isawagirlinfrontofmebuysomebreadandmilk.Whenshewasgoingtoleave，shefoundanoldbeggarunderatree.Helookedveryhungry.Thegirlcameuptohimandgaveherbreakfasttohim.Whenthebeggarsaidthankstothegirl，shesaidnothingandwentawaywithasmileonherface.Iwasmovedbywhatthegirldid.Herkindnesstouchedmealot.Idecidedtolearnfromherandbeakindperson.Ishouldhelpthepeopleinneedfromnowon.在你的生活中一定有一些难以忘记的经历，请你根据下面的提示，以“AnUnforgettableExperience”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，描述一次让你难忘的经历。提示：1.Whenandwheredidithappen？2.Whatwereyoudoingwhenithappened？3.Howdidyoufeelaboutit？AnUnforgettableExperience?Ifyouaskmewhatmyunforgettableexperienceis，Iwilltellyouastoryaboutmeandalittledog.LastSaturdayafternoon，Itookawalkinaparknearby.WhenIwasgoingback，adogwalkedafterme.ItfollowedmeuntilIgottothedoorofmyhouse.WhenIwasopeningthedoor，itwassittingonthegroundandlookingatmesadly，asifitweresaying，“Igotlost.Couldyoupleasehelpme？”“Whatapoordog！”Ithought.ThenIletitinandgaveitsome