冀教版九年级下册英语精品教学课件 UNIT 7 写作能力提升练 (2).pptVIP

**素材典藏经典例题写作实践UNIT7WorkforPeace写作能力提升练短语：dealwith,breakdown,jumpin,intheend,reachanagreement,haveafightwith句型：1.Igetangrybecause...2.Then...realized...andsaidsorryto...3.Thanksto...,everythingisgoingwellnow.衔接词：and,or,but,so等好朋友John和Lucy因为琐事吵架了,对此你想说些什么?请根据以下提示写一篇短文。要求:1.简单描述图片信息;2.提出自己的看法。［审题指导］1.体裁:议论文2.人称:第一人称、第三人称3.时态:一般过去时和一般现在时［思路构建］［范文赏析］JohnandLucyhadafightwitheachother.JohnsentamessagetotellLucythatthegametimewaschanged,butLucydidn’tcheckhermessagesintimeandmissedthegame.ForLucy,IwanttotellherthatJohnreallytriedtogetintouchwithherbutfailed.Shedidn’tcheckhermessagescarefully,sothatwasherfault,notJohn’s.ForJohn,wheneveryoneagreesonatime,itshouldn’tbechanged.Ifithasto,hemusttelleveryonefacetoface.Sonexttimeheshouldgotoherdirectly.Finally,Iwanttosaythatfriendsaremoreimportantthanagame.高分点评:1.开篇点题,引出故事。2.逻辑清晰,按照起因—经过—结果的顺序叙述。3.亮点词汇:haveafightwithsb.和某人吵架;intime及时;trytodosth.尽力做某事;getintouchwithsb.与某人取得联系;agreeon商定等。假如你是李华,是你们学校校报“JustAskMe”栏目的编辑。最近,你收到了王梅的稿件,她向你倾诉了她心中的烦恼。现在请你为她提供一些合理的建议。不少于80词。DearLiHua,Iusuallydowellinmyexams,butIhaveaproblemnow.Iseldomspeakinfrontofmyclassmates,soIamnotgoodatmakingfriends.WhatshouldIdo?WangMei提示:1.Whycan’tshemakefriends?2.Whatshouldshedotosolvetheproblem?DearWangMei,You’reagoodstudent,and_________________________________________________________________________LiHua_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________