人教版九年级下册英语精品教学课件 UnIT 8 写作能力提升练.pptVIP

**写作实践话题写作常见错误呈现实战演练UNIT8写作能力提升练本月你所在的英语俱乐部将开展“书香悦读”活动，要求每位成员推荐一本英语课外读物。假如你想参加，并想推荐你最喜欢的《我生活的故事》一书，请你写一篇英语短文，为该活动做准备。要点：1.海伦·凯勒的自传；2.讲述了她的第一个22年的生活以及她的老师莎莉文小姐；3.该书简单易懂，你从中学到……注意：1.短文须包括上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数70左右（开头已为你写好，不计入总词数）。参考词汇：TheStoryofMyLife（《我生活的故事》）；autobiography自传；HelenKeller海伦·凯勒；MissSullivan莎莉文小姐IlovereadinginmyfreetimeandIwanttorecommendabooktoyou.Itsnameis____________________________________________________________________________________［审题指导］1.体裁：说明文2.话题：介绍并推荐自己最喜欢的一本书3.人称：第一、三人称4.时态：一般现在时为主［思路构建］IlovereadinginmyfreetimeandIwanttorecommendabooktoyou.ItsnameisTheStoryofMyLife.ItisanautobiographybyHelenKeller,adeafandblindwomanwriter.Thebookisaboutthefirst22yearsofherlifeandshealsointroducesherteacherMissSullivan.ThankstoMissSullivan,HelenKellerlearnedtowriteandbecameexcitedaboutherfuture.Afterthat,shewrotemanyfamousbooks.［精彩范文］IthinkTheStoryofMyLifeisamust-read.It’ssimpleandeasytoread.What’smore,wecanlearnsomethingfromthebook:Nothingisdifficultifweputourheartsintoit.1.文章思路清晰，采用“总—分—总”三段式结构。2.连接词运用恰当，尤其是what’smore的运用为作文增彩。3.thanksto，becomeexcitedabout等短语的正确运用，展示了作者扎实的基本功。高分点评：下面句子均有一处或两处错误，请找出并写出正确的句子。1.Mikeusedtobeinterestedinwriteshortstories. ___________________________________________Mikeusedtobeinterestedinwritingshortstories.2.Sheisoneofmyfavouritewriterintheworld. ___________________________________________3.Thebooktellsusabouthowgetagoodeducation. ______________________________________________Sheisoneofmyfavouritewritersintheworld.Thebooktellsusabouthowtogetagoodeducation.4.HelenKelleralwaysworkhardtoliveandlearn. _____________________________________________5.HelenKellerisbornonJune27th,1880andheisveryfamous. ________________