人教版九年级下册英语精品教学课件 Unit 11 4. 写作提优练.pptVIP

**写作提优练写作提优练Unit11Sadmoviesmakemecry.【写作导引】本单元以“情感”为话题，属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“情感与情绪”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及:①描述周围的事物给人带来的影响；②谈论如何控制和调整情绪，积极乐观地面对生活。【写作任务】初中时光是绚烂多彩的，肯定会遇到开心、不开心或其他的事情。为了培养孩子们正确面对困难、乐观向上的生活态度，校英文报正在征集关于“Somethingthatmademehappy,sador...”的文章。请拟定一个标题，用英语写一篇不少于80~100词的短文向校报投稿。【精彩范文】SomethingthatmademehappySomethingthatmademehappywaswinningthepianocompetition.ItwasheldonSeptember20thintheCityMusicHall.Onthatday,Isawmanypeoplethere.IwassonervousandworriedthatIwouldmakemistakes1duringmyperformance4.ThenIrememberedwhatmyfathertoldme—alwaysbelieveinyourself2andyouarethebest.Hiswordsmademefeelmuchbetter.Whenitwasmyturntoplay,Iwalkeduptothepianowithconfidenceandperformedwell.5Youwouldn’tbelievehowmuchIwantedtoknowtheresult.WhenIlearnedIwonfirstprize,Ihuggedmyparentsinexcitement.3Thisexperiencetaughtmethatitisveryimportanttohaveconfidenceinyourself.亮点词块1makemistakes犯错误2believeinyourself相信你自己3inexcitement兴奋地高分句子4IwassonervousandworriedthatIwouldmakemistakesduringmyperformance.(that引导宾语从句)我如此紧张并担心我会在表演中犯错误。5Whenitwasmyturntoplay,Iwalkeduptothepianowithconfidenceandperformedwell.(when引导时间状语从句)轮到我表演的时候，我自信地走向钢琴，并表现得很好。跟踪演练事情变化会影响情绪变化。为了引导学生正确处理情绪内耗，某校以“DealwithBadEmotion”为主题，对500名同学进行了问卷调查，下面是部分项目的统计结果。假如你是该校的学生，请结合图表信息，以“DealwithBadEmotion”为题用英语写一篇80~100词的短文。内容包括:1.简要说明图表内容；2.从图表中选择一项，结合自己的经历，谈谈你是如何应对生活中的坏情绪的。DealwithBadEmotionOurschooldidasurveyamong500studentsonthetopicof“DealwithBadEmotion”.Herearetheresults.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________