人教版九年级下册英语精品教学课件 UNIT 12 写作能力提升练 (4).pptVIP

**写作任务思路点拨写作实践UNIT12Lifeisfulloftheunexpected.写作能力提升练请你以“MyLuckyDay”为题，写一篇英语短文，讲述你经历过的幸运的一天，讲讲那天发生了什么事情。［谋篇布局］理清文章要素，构建文章结构。［遣词造句］就结构图中的要点和词语完成句子。1.我叔叔说他可以捎我一程。 Myunclesaidthat__________________________.2.我意识到我把钱包忘在家里了，我不能买午餐。 Irealizedthat______________________________ andthatIcouldn’tbuylunch.hecouldgivemealiftIhadleftmywalletathome3.我最好的朋友李华马上借给我一些钱。 MybestfriendLiHua______________________________.4.老师表扬我，因为我英语考试取得最高分。 I________________________________becauseI ________________________intheEnglishexam.lentmesomemoneyatoncewaspraisedbymyteachergotthehighestscore［巧妙衔接］在阐述经历时，可以按照时间顺序进行表达，将几件事情串联起来，恰当使用连词如when、after等，使上下文联系更紧密。［连句成篇］MyLuckyDayIwillalwaysrememberthedateSeptember14th,2024.Thatwastheluckiestdayofmylife.WhenIwokeupthatmorning,itwasraining.Iwasabouttogotothebusstationtotakethebustoschoolwhenmyunclecalledmeup.Hesaidthathecouldgivemealift.Laterthatday,IrealizedthatIhadleftmywalletathomeandthatIcouldn’tbuylunch.MybestfriendLiHualentmesomemoneyatonce.Afterthat,IwaspraisedbymyteacherbecauseIgotthehighestscoreintheEnglishexam.Icouldn’tbelievethatIdidsowell,andneithercouldmyparents.Thatnighttheyweresohappythattheypromisedtobuyanewbikeformeasaprize.Whataluckyday!高分点评:1.思路清晰，采用三段式结构。2.文中运用时间状语从句、宾语从句、结果状语从句、感叹句为作文增彩。3.准确运用短语比如：beaboutto，givesb.alift，laterthatday、afterthat，使文章衔接流畅，句式丰富。假如你是李华，请你根据下表中的内容提示写一篇短文，描述一下发生在你身上的这些意外事件。词数100左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥。提示词汇:fetch去取来；electricbicycle电动车；haveapaininmyarm(s)胳膊疼Todaywasareallyunluckydayforme.Istayeduplatelastnightbecauseofanexcitingsoccermatch.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________