2025-2026学年高一上学期英语续写入门指导课件.pdfVIP

／

高一英语续写指导

｀

原文理解＋情节构建＋语言速写

读原文找出记叙文要素

CDAva,afifth-grader,longedforacellphoneliikeherpeersbuthadtowaituntilshewasthirteen.Topersuadeherparents,

shepennedanessay,demonstratingshewasmatureenoughforacellphone.Herparents,impressed,gaveheranoldphone.

®Ava,herdadsaidseriously,acellphoneisntjustforfunandgames.Itsasignificantresponsibility.Youmustkeep

yourphonesecure.Youmustsilenceitinpublicspaces.Youmust…“Helistedallofthewaysthatshehadtoberesponsible

withherphone.ButAva,toobusywithchoosingtheperfectwallpaper,downloadingapps,andchattingwithherbestfriend

Sarah,onlyhalf-listened.

@Overtheweekend,Sarahsmomtookthegirlstoamovie.NormallyAvaavoidedhorrorfilms,butSarahspleading

wordswithfunnymemes（表情包）hadsomehowconvincedAvathatthemoviemightactuallybeenjoyable.Beforethemovie

started,Sarahsmominstructedthegirlstosilencetheirphonesoutofrespectforothers.Asthemoviestensionbuilt,Ava

foundherselfgrowingincreasinglyuncomfortable.Ineedtogotothebathroom,AvawhisperedtoSarah.

@Afterthemovie,whilewaitingforSarahsmomtofetchthecar,Avafeltasinkingfeeling.Icantfindmyphone!she

shrieked,pattingdownallofherpockets.Panic-stricken,Avasearchedherbag,yetherphoneseemedtohavevanished.Ava

gotintothecar,herstomachinknots.

@Areyougoingtotellyourparents?SarahwhisperedtoAvaontheirrideback.Avawassilent,hermindracingwith

theconsequences.Shecouldenvisionherparentsdisappointedfacesandharshwords.Shefearedthatthisincidentmightlead

toherparentstakingawaytheprivilegeofhavingaphonealtogether.

@Astheyarrived,Avaclimbedoutoft