【让故事更有画面感】续写动作链+动作面.pptxVIP

读后续写三原则;续写动作链+动作面

让故事有画面感;Pleasedescribethefollowingpictures.;Hestoppedthetaxi,jumpedinwiththesuitcaseandtoldthedriver,“Gotothepolicestation,please.”;;2017年浙江高考：被狼围堵，身处险境;;Pleasedescribethefollowingpicture.;1.痛苦动作分解:尝到酸柠檬=

尝了一口柠檬tookasipoflemon（taking）

缩回脑袋drewbackhishead(drawing)

吐了出来spitout(spitting)

流出眼泪tearswelledup(welling)

组合动作

主语+V1，V2andV3（动作先后顺序）

Hetookasipoflemon,drewbackhishead,and

spititout.

主语+V1，V2andV3with+名词+Ving

Hetookasipoflemon,drewbackhishead,and

spititoutwithtearswellingupinhiseyes.;开心动作分解:

看到小男孩哭了caughtsightofthelttleboycrying（catching）

高兴地拍手clappedherhands（clapping）

嘴角上扬raisedthecornersofhermouth（raising）

望向另一方lookedattheotherside（looking）

Ving,人+V谓语动词

Catchingsightofthelttleboycrying,sheclapped

herhandshappily,raisedthecornersofhermouth,

andlookedattheotherside.

;;;;;;;Sheldon惊恐大叫;Practice;AMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISE

;Para1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

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Para2:Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

;父亲了解情况后,没有发火

父亲和他们一起做早餐

在父亲的助攻下,早餐顺利做好了;Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Hiseyebrowsnarrowedandhishandsrestedonhiships.Judgingfromhisexpression,itwasevidentthathewasabouttoexplodedafterseeingthemess.Totheirrelief,havinglearnedtheirplan,hekneltdown,pattedthemontheirshoulderandsaid,“Timeisonourside.Let’sdoittogether”.Withouttheslightesthesitation,theycleanedupthemess,cookedtheporridgeandtoastedthebreadonceagain.Beforelong,armedwiththeexperienceoffailureandanextrahelpinghand,thebreakfastwasready,givingoffpleasantsmell.Wornoutastheywere,theirheartswerefilledwithnothingelsebutjoyandpride.;续写常用动作;动作描写精准化

;看

发现，认出

注意到

看见

看不到

xx进入视野。

xx的目光落到..

扫视

;手;脚;说;说;

句式1：主语+V1，V2andV3;

句式2:主语+V1，doing/done

;主语