高中英语2026届高考读后续写动作链描写高分段（共六类场景）.docVIP

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动作链描写高分段

一、个人成长

1.以辅助角色加入电台团队后的学习积累

整理Olivia的主持笔记协助Mr.Carter搭建设备认真对待Mr.Carter布置的每一项任务专注观察Olivia主持，记录其处理意外和与嘉宾互动的方式利用业余时间独自练习主持技巧对着镜子排练以提升表达能力得到Mr.Carter认可，被告知进步显著

ShesortedthroughOliviasnotesHelpedMr.CartersetuptheequipmentApproachedeachtaskassignedbyMr.CartercarefullyWatchedOliviahostintentlyandtookdetailednotesonhowOliviahandledunexpectedissuesandinteractedwithguestsPractisedhostingtechniquesonherowninhersparetimeRehearsedinfrontofamirrortoimproveherdeliveryReceivedrecognitionfromMr.Carterwhotoldhershehadimprovedalot.

2.Olivia生病，主动请缨并完成直播

听到Olivia生病无法主持的消息，心跳加速主动向Mr.Carter提出代替Olivia进行直播（声音因紧张颤抖）等待Mr.Carter回应（其犹豫片刻后点头同意）回忆过去几周学到的知识和技巧顺利完成直播结束后工作室爆发掌声，感到惊讶Mr.Carter走来为她竖起大拇指心生成就感，满心欢喜意识到凭借坚持和决心能实现梦想

UponhearingthatOliviawasillandcouldnthost,MaryfeltherheartskipabeatTooktheinitiativetotellMr.CartershecouldtakeOliviasplaceforthelivebroadcast(hervoicetremblingwithnervousness)WaitedforMr.Cartersresponse(henoddedafterhesitatingforamoment)RecalledwhatshehadlearnedoverthepastfewweeksCompletedthelivebroadcastsmoothlyFeltastonishedwhenthestudioeruptedinapplauseaftershefinishedMr.Carterwalkedoverandgaveherathumbs-upWasoverwhelmedwithasenseofaccomplishmentandbeamedwithjoyRealizedshecouldachieveherdreamwithpersistenceanddetermination.

二、怀旧温暖

1.冬日停电后取出老收音机缓解困境

冬日夜晚村庄突然停电，妈妈伸手反复按灯开关却无果妈妈因失望皱眉叹气，用厚毯子裹紧自己抱怨停电难熬“我”突然想起上周修好的棕色木壳收音机靠电池供电“我”决心让大家振作，冲进地下室取出收音机“我”一打开收音机电源开关，轻柔旋律便充满屋子邻居被音乐吸引来“我”家聊天，温暖氛围驱散夜晚寒冷

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