高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练11（解析版）.docxVIP

高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练11

一、环境描写（渲染氛围）

1.高分句式：The+自然景物+动词（ed/ing）,casting+光影/气息+over地点

2.高分句式：Alight+感官形容词+自然现象+filledtheair,making地点+状态

3.高分句式：As+时间/天气变化,地点+gradually+呈现的动态变化

?描写练习1：夕阳染红天空，在安静的校园长椅上投下长长的影子。

?英文翻译1：Thesettingsundyedtheskyred,___________________________________.

?描写练习2：一阵带着花香的微风弥漫在空气中，让整个花园都显得温柔起来。

?英文翻译2：__________________________________________,makingthewholegardenfeelgentle.

?描写练习3：随着夜幕降临，小镇的灯光渐渐亮起，像撒在黑布上的碎星。

?英文翻译3：__________________________,thelightsofthesmalltowngraduallylitup,likebrokenstarsscatteredonablackcloth.

答案：

castinglongshadowsoverthequietcampusbench

Alightbreezewiththescentofflowersfilledtheair

Asnightfell

Paragraph1

Thesettingsundyedtheskyred,(1)__________________________________(在安静的校园长椅上投下长长的影子).Afewstudentswalkedslowlyalongthetree-linedpath,theirlaughterfadingintothesoftglowofdusk.(2)__________________________________(一阵带着花香的微风弥漫在空气中),makingthewholegardenfeelgentle.Somebirdschirpedtheirlastsongsbeforereturningtotheirnests,andthesoundofadistantbelladdedatouchoftranquilitytothispeacefulevening.

答案：

castinglongshadowsoverthequietcampusbench

Alightbreezewiththescentofflowersfilledtheair

Paragraph2

(1)__________________________________(随着夜幕降临),thelightsofthesmalltowngraduallylitup,likebrokenstarsscatteredonablackcloth.Theoldstreetlampsflickeredsoftly,paintingwarmstreaksoflightonthewetpavementleftbytheafternoonrain.(2)

__________________________________(一阵带着花香的微风弥漫在空气中),makingthewholegardenfeelgentle.Children’splayfulshoutsfromthesquaredieddown,andthetownslippedintoaquietslumber,wrappedinthecoolnessofthenight.

答案：

Asnightfell

Alightbreezewiththescentofflowersfilledtheair

二、动作刻画（凸显细节）

1.高分句式：主语+核心动作+方式状语（with短语）,伴随动作（doing）

2.高分句式：With+身体部位+状态,主语+连贯动作1+andthen+动作2

3.高分句式：主语+快