高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练13（解析版）.docxVIP

高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练13

一、环境渲染类（奠定基调）

1.高分句式：As+时间/天气变化,感官细节+主角反应（情景融合）

2.高分句式：Theairwasfilledwith+气味/声音,环境动态+主角动作（氛围沉浸）

3.高分句式：Under+特定环境,环境细节+主角状态（场景聚焦）

?描写练习1：随着最后一缕阳光隐入远山，刺骨的寒风裹着沙粒刮过脸颊，男孩下意识地把外套领口向上拉了拉。

?英文翻译1：____________________________________________________________,thebitingcoldwindblewsandagainsthischeeks,makingtheboypullupthecollarofhiscoatunconsciously.

?描写练习2：空气里满是烤面包的香甜，窗外的梧桐叶打着旋儿落下，女孩踮起脚尖，把刚洗好的围巾挂在阳台的晾衣绳上。

?英文翻译2：_______________________________________________,andtheplanetreeleavesoutsidethewindowwhirleddown.Thegirlstoodonhertoesandhungthenewlywashedscarfonthebalconyclothesline.

?描写练习3：在昏暗的路灯下，积着雨水的路面映出模糊的光影，老人拄着拐杖，慢慢走在空无一人的街道上。

?英文翻译3：______________________________,therain-puddledroadreflectedvaguelightandshadow.Theoldmanleanedonhiscaneandwalkedslowlyontheemptystreet.

答案：

Asthelastrayofsunlightfadedbehindthedistantmountains

Theairwasfilledwiththesweetsmellofbakedbread

Underthedimstreetlamp

段落一

Afterhikingwithhisdadallafternoon,Tom’slegsfeltsore,buthestillchattedexcitedlyaboutthebirdsthey’dseen.Theywalkeddownthemountainpath(1)____________________

________(天空渐渐变成橘色),andTomkeptlookingbackatthedistantpeaks.(2)__________________________________(随着最后一缕阳光隐入远山),thebitingcoldwindblewsandagainsthischeeks,makingtheboypullupthecollarofhiscoatunconsciously.Hisdadnoticedandhandedhimawarmhat,saying,“Wintercomesearlyhere—(3)__________________________________(我们得在天更黑前赶回去).”Tomnodded,tuckinghishandsintohispockets,and(4)__________________________________(加快脚步跟上了爸爸).

答案：

astheskyturnedorange

Asthelastrayofsunlightfadedbehindthedistantmountains

weshouldheadbackbeforeitgetsdarker

quickenedhisstepstokeepupwithhisdad

段落二

ItwasaquietSundaymorning,andEmmadecidedtohelphermomwithhouseworkafterbreakfast.First,shefoldedthecleanclothe