FNM高中三年级英语写作 复习课件.pptVIP

２００５年湖南高考英语写作题目要求：假设你是李平，最近参加了由某电视台举办的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次英语夏令营活动，现就有关事项，征求你的意见．请根据下表所提供的信息，用英语以书信形式给予答复。 活动时间 ７月１５日－２２日或８月１５日－２２日 活动内容 参加英语角／学唱英语歌曲 听英语讲座／表演英语短剧看英语电影／教外教学中文 对活动内容的建议或要求 注意： １选择适合你的时间　　并说明理由． ２选择两项你喜欢的活动并说明理由． ３对活动的内容提出至少一个建议或要求． ４词数１００左右． ５信的开头和结尾已经给出． 考生作品 Dear Sir or Madame, I am very glad to be invited to the English summer camp. I prefer to go in August, because I am free at that time. I like to take part in English Corner and learn to sing English songs. I like English corner because I want to use English to talk with others. I like English songs because my parents are artists. At the same time, I suggest that all the activities should be organized together and then we will have a good time together. Thanks a lot. Yours truly, Li Ping 优点：完成了试题规定的任务．应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求．应用了简单的语句的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，无语法错误，达到了预期的写作目的。 缺点：没有应用较多的语法结构和词汇，句式单一。对建议的表达缺乏思想性。 　　　　　　参考范文 Dear Sir or Madame, I am very glad to be invited to the English summer camp. I prefer to go in July because I will have to prepare myself for the new school term in August. It seems all the activities you offer are attractive and meaningful, but I’d like to attend the English lectures, from which I can get more information on British and American culture. With the coming of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games more and more foreigners are eager to know about China. So I hope to teach foreigners Chinese and spread Chinese culture. It’s been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could you organize a tour around the city during the camp. Thank you very much．　　　　　　　　　Yours truly, Li Ping 高分作文的标准（２１－２５分）： １．完全完成了规定任务； ２．覆盖所有内容要点； ３．应用了较多的语法结构和词汇; ４．语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误但为尽力使用较复杂或较高级词汇所致，具备了较强的语言运