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第 七 讲：英 语 写 作 （二） ———————————————————————————————————————— 大作文 往年试题： Directions: write a composition of no less than 250 words according to the outline given below. Sample 1 My View on Playing Computer Games 有人认为学生打电脑游戏有利于智力开发。 有人认为学生打电脑游戏妨碍学习。 我的观点。 Sample 2：对贫富差距加大现象谈谈看法 评分标准 Global scoring Content Language 2分: 条理不清， 思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分：基本切题。表达思想不清，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 8分：有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误较多，其中有一些严重错误。 11分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误 14分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上没有语言错误，仅有个别小错。 注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个独立的词而无法表达思想，给0分。 严重错误——语法错误 There are many reasons caused the accident. The driver of the car no in. The life is becoming gooder and gooder. That day rain bigly. The man who through the street The car which in a fast speed hit him. The car which in a fast speed hit him. I got the place where happened the accident. Our city would happen many traffic. 写作注意事项 审好题，想好再写，不要写了又划掉，也不要写完了发现字数不够有写，这样整篇文章就不联贯了。 把握好文章的重心，一般“我的观点”应该是重心。 注意写作的格式——缩进式或齐头式。 拿不准的词、短语或用法应避免使用。 表达要清晰、简洁，不必一味追求结构的复杂而尽可能多的使用从句，这样文章会显得很罗嗦。如：The economy is developing at a speed which is very fast. 注意用词和搭配。 检查-s和-ed，尽量避免严重错误。 Choice of Words 1. Three levels of English words English native words (core) informal (oral) French or Spanish words Latin or Greek words (academic words) formal (written) Examples English French or Spanish Latin or Greek ask inquire interrogate break sever separate fire flame conflagration house abode residence kingly royal regal manly male masculine rise mount ascend time age epoch I know that I am aware that I believe that I am convinced that I have a good idea. A good idea occurs to me. Cause give rise to Emphasize lay e