20120304-11佛山二模作文tips.pptxVIP

基础写作：程序：实例分析 → 小组讨论 → 老师点评 analyze some examples, have a discussion in groups make one’s comments on结论：行为端正；学习认真； come to a conclusion, be well-behaved work hard / be diligent/ hard-working为人着想；讲礼貌；与人融洽相处 considerate, polite, easy to get along with影响：认识了自我,决心做个受欢迎的学生 learn more about oneself/ have a better understanding of oneself, be determined to do (1) 休假学年的好处；Undoubtedly/Obviously/Apparently,… There is no doubt that /It goes without saying that/ There’s no denying that … be of great benefit / have many advantages provide sb. with an opportunity to do lay a good foundation for one’s career development / further studies bridge the gap between the academic world and the real lifebe exposed to different cultures and broaden one’s horizons(2) 休假学年的弊端；Despite …, we can’t ignore its disadvantages. As the saying goes, every coin has two sides, and taking a gap year is no exception. forget what has been learned, interrupt one’s schooling, fail to continue the learning process efficiently, fall behind others in one’s study, cost much money, add to one’s financial burden (3) 假如你有休假学年，你打算做什么？请说明理由。(提示：“打算”应突出某一种计划为宜）If I were given / If I had…, I would prefer to/choose to …1.travel to another country, improve one’s English, experience different cultures, learn how to adapt to a new environment, learn to overcome hardship with great determination and perseverance, solve problems independently,2.work as a volunteer in poverty –stricken areas, help sb. realize their dreams, cultivate myself into a more mature and caring person, develop one’s social skills, strengthen one’s sense of responsibility, enrich one’s learning experience / practical knowledge,