12高三作文模拟西城.ppt

;内容要点： 1．出发（时间，地点，人物 ，事件） 2．见面 3．来到小明的房间 4．话别;内容要点： 1．出发（时间，地点，人物 ，事件,目的） 细节：上周末我和父亲一大早就出发去看李明。 I ，together with my father, went to visit Li Ming by car last weekend . Early in the morning we set off to learn about his situation. We saw green mountains and tall trees, soaked in the morning sunshine ,feeling refreshed with fresh air around us.;内容要点： 2．见面 开车一小时后，我们到达小明家。 After a two-hour drive, we arrived at Xiao Ming’s home. 这时他在院子干活。 At that moment, Xiao Ming was working in his courtyard.（plough his field) He lived in a bungalow.Except going to school, he needed to help his grandma to plough and irrigate their field.(郭昊）;内容要点： 3．来到小明的房间 我们印象最深的是，小明怀着感恩和激动的心情，向我们展示他的成绩。 Grateful and moved, Xiao Ming showed us his excellent school work（grades), which impressed us greatly. 墙上挂满了奖状 We could see lots of certificates of prizes hung up on the walls in his room. 展示他得100分的卷子 Showed us his recent examination papers, which was marked with 100 scores.( papers with a full mark);内容要点： 4．话别 不知不觉该走了 We talked so happily that we didn’t realize it was time to leave. It was dusk before we realized it. 送我们到村口，挥手再见说会再来。 Xiao Ming and his grandfather saw us off at the village entrance and we waved goodbye to them, promising to come back again. They didn’t wave their hands and say goodbye until they accompanied us to the entrance of the village. ;接尾： I firmly believe after you give a flower to someone, the fragrance remains in your hand.(尹茗媛） Despite a little physical fatigue, I was lifted to a new level in spirit and heart and proud of myself. I believe, if every one of us can devote a bit of love to others, such as the supporting to the boy, our lives will be more beautiful and wonderful.(张肇耕）;This trip was extremely meaningful because it not only set a bridge between Xiao Ming and me,and also I learned a lot from him so I will treasure it forever.（程妍瑾） ; ; ;描图： In the picture, we can see two turnips, one with small leaves and the other with large ones. Naturally, we