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* 5. Most Common Errors in Writing  A Grain of Sand 一粒沙子 William Blake 威廉.布莱克 To see a world in a grain of sand, 从一粒沙子看到一个世界 And a heaven in a wild fllower, 从一朵野花看到一个天堂 Hold infinity in the palm of your hand, 把握在你手心里的就是无限 And eternity in an hour. 永恒也就消融于一个时辰 * Most Common Errors in Writing 1. Wrong word The Pacers played there best, but that was not good enough. Paradise Lost(失乐园) contains many illusions to classical mythology(神话). their allusions Illusion: 幻想； allusion: 暗示。 * Most Common Errors in Writing 2. Wrong or missing verb ending The United States drop two atomic bombs on Japan in 1945. dropped * Most Common Errors in Writing 3. Comma Splice[接合] I was strongly attracted to her, she had special qualities. They always had ham for Easter, this was a family tradition. for Having * Most Common Errors in Writing 4. Unnecessary shift in tense（时态） Abby laughs until she cried during the class. Brian is in charge of finance; he will always keep his office locked. cries keeps * Most Common Errors in Writing 5. Wrong tense (时态) or verb form Luke Reese has broke many soccer records. By the time Jim arrived, Mikel left. had broken * Most Common Errors in Writing 6. Lack of subject-verb(主语动词) agreement A central part of my life goals have been to go to graduate school. has * Most Common Errors in Writing 7. Lack of agreement between pronoun and antecedent (代名词和先行词) Neither Nadja nor Kari felt that they had been treated fairly. she * Most Common Errors in Writing 8. Unnecessary comma (s) with a restrictive element. People, who wanted to preserve wilderness areas opposed the plan to privatize national parks. * 9、逗号迭加 (Comma Splice) [误] Stevenson’s romances are entertaining, they are full of exciting adventures. [正] Stevenson’s romances are entertaining, for they are full of exciting adventures. * 10、文体杂乱 (Choppy Style) 在一篇文章中，句子的长短搭配是很在讲究的。如果每句都是短句，读起来就很乏味。 [初稿] We have established a Communications System Planning Team [1]. This