荷塘月色翻译对比分析.pptVIP

荷塘月色 朱纯深 王椒升 杨宪益、戴乃迭 李明 1、这几天心里颇不宁静。今晚在院子里坐着乘凉忽然想起日日走过的荷塘在这满月的光里总该另有一番样子吧。月亮渐渐地升高了墙外马路上孩子们的欢笑已经听不见了妻在屋里拍着闰儿迷迷糊糊地哼着眠歌。我悄悄地披了大衫带上门出去。 忽然想起日日走过的荷塘在这满月的光里总该另有一番样子吧 it occurred to me that the Lotus Pond which I pass by everyday must assume quite a different look in such moonlit night.朱纯深译 ? I suddenly thought of the lotus pond that I pass on my way day in and day out. Tonight it must have a charm all its own bathed in the light of the full moon. 王椒升译 ? it struck me how different the lotus pool I pass every day must look under a full moon. 杨宪益、戴乃迭译 ? I suddenly thought of the lotus pond I pass by every day: on such a fully-moonlit night it must assume a different outlook.李明译 ? 推荐译本： it occurred to me that the Lotus Pond which I pass by everyday must assume quite a different look in such moonlit night.朱纯深译 ? 月亮渐渐地升高了 朱纯深译A full moon was rising high in the sky 王椒升译The moon was now rising slowly. 杨宪益、戴乃迭译The moon was sailing higher and higher up the heavens 李明译As the moon was rising higher and higher up in the sky ? 2、沿着荷塘是一条曲折的小煤屑路。这是一条幽僻的路白天也少人走夜晚更加寂寞。荷塘四面长着许多树蓊蓊郁郁的。路的一旁是些杨柳和一些不知道名字的树。没有月光的晚上这路上阴森森的有些怕人。今晚却很好虽然月光也还是淡淡的。 这是一条幽僻的路白天也少人走夜晚更加寂寞。荷塘四面长着许多树蓊蓊郁郁的。 It is peaceful and secluded here a place not frequented by pedestrians even in the daytime now at night it looks more solitary in a lush shady ambience of trees all around the pond.朱纯深译 ? so secluded as to be little frequented in the daytime to say nothing of its loneliness at night. Around the pond grows a profusion of luxuriant trees. 王椒升译 It is off the beaten track and few pass this way even by day so at night it is still more quiet. Trees grow thick and bosky all around the pool ……杨宪益、戴乃迭译 ? The footpath peaceful and secluded is not much frequented by pedestrians in the daytime and at night it is even more solitary. Around the pond grows s huge profusion of trees exuberant and luxuriant. 李明译 推荐译本： It is peaceful and secluded here a place not frequented by pedestrians even in the daytime