2013届高三英语书面表达专题指导评析（第二部分专题练评）（专题二 图画式1）.pptVIP

2012高考福建卷（笔者有所改动） 第一部分 描述图画 公民道德话题的看图写作，均是现实生活中的片段展示，探讨面对公民道德缺失的社会现象个人的感想，即公民道德缺失原因与解决方法，考生应该有话可说。本篇是看图作文，属于先叙后议的文体。 一、确立主题 认真看图，结合文字和图画，确立所要表达的主题是什么。本篇的主题就是标题所表达的内容“Mind Your Behavior in Public Places”，无需考生多想。 二、提炼要点 围绕确立的主题，仔细看图和文字，列出文字提示和图中的要点。 文字提示中的要点： “我”和“我”的朋友们上星期六在“the Fairy Lake Park”观光。 （这是交代事情发生的时间和地点） 所见所闻：即图中的要点 人物： 一男一女（根据常识可以推测为：一对年轻的夫妇） 背景： 结合图中女游客的话“啊，多美的景色！”从自然环境上（如：空气清新，阳光灿烂，春天的美，小鸟的吟唱等等方面）做些适当的想象 行为： 湖中乘着小船的一对年轻夫妇吃着东西，有说有笑（旁若无人）；他们向湖中吐痰、扔垃圾（丝毫没有注意到湖边的告示牌上所写的警示“湖中勿扔垃圾”） 遣词造句（注意多重表达） 1.①Last Sunday, my friends and I went travelling in the Fairy Lake Park. ②Last Sunday, I ,as well as my friends went to pay a visit to the Fairy Lake Park. ③Last Sunday, together with my friends ,went sightseeing in the Fairy Lake Park. ④Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. 第二部分 发表感想 发表个人感想时可适当发挥，但内容要符合逻辑，层次要分明，衔接要自然。 围绕漫画主题自拟感想 可以按照这样的思路去自拟感想： 这对夫妇的行为给了“我”什么印象——如果人人都这样会造成什么后果——我们应该怎么做——总结性话语。 遣词造句（注意多重表达） 1.①What the couple did made a bad impression on me. ②What the couple did left me in thought. ③I had no choice but to take what the couple did into consideration. ④Such behavior did left me deep in thought. 2.①If we do what the couple did as was shown in the above picture, all lakes will be seriously polluted and soon turned into huge dustbins. ②If all people visiting the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did, the lake will be seriously polluted and turned into a huge dustbin sooner or later. ③If all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did, the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin. 3.①Littering pollutes the environment; bad manners ruin the beauty of tourist attractions. Dear countrymen,? mind?your?behavior?in?public?places. ②I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. For example, make sure to throw rubbish into a dustbin or int