英语写作常见错误与分析（修改）.docVIP

一．Disagreements １． When one have money, he can do what he want to.(人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么．) Once?one?has?money, he?can?do?what?he?wants?(to?do).二．Misplaced Modifiers (修饰语错位） １． I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus. I?believe?I?can?do?it?well?and?I?will??know?the?world?outside?the?campus well. 三．Sentence Fragments (句子不完整） There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV , radio ,newspaper and so on. There?are?many?ways?to?know?society, for?example, by? TV, radio, and?newspaper.四．Dangling Modifiers (悬垂修饰语） 指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清． 1. At the age of ten, my grandfather died. When?I?was?ten,?my?grandfather?died.2. To do well in college, good grades are essential.： To?do?well?in?college,?a?student?needs?good?grades.五． Misuse of Parts of Speech (词性误用) １． None can negative the importance of money. None can deny the importance of money. 六． Ambiguous Reference of Pronouns (指代不清) 代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者先后所用的代词不一致。 Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.(玛丽和我姐姐很要好，因为她要她做她的伴娘。) Mary was friendly to my sister because he wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid. 七．Run-on Sentences(不间断句子) 1. There are many ways we get to know the outside world There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world. There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world 八． Troubles in Diction (措词毛病) １．The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.(农业方面化学物质使用的不断增加也造成了污染。) The abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution. 九． Redundancy (累赘) 1. In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him. In spite of his laziness, I like him 2．For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need. Diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need. 十． (Incoherence不连贯)１． The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth. Fresh water is the most important thing