2013届山东德州高考英语（短文改错+书面表达）精练精析7.docVIP

山东德州2013届高考英语短文改错+书面表达精练精析7 Ⅰ. 短文改错 此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正： 此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意：原行没有错的不要改。 China, with a huge number of bicycles, called 搕he Kingdom 1. _______ of Bikes? Bikes, what many people still ride to go to work, serve 2. _______ as an important means of transportation. There are some reason 3. _______ for it. First, the price of bikes is low, comparing with that of cars. 4. _______ Second, many people go to work by bike to avoid the traffic jam. 5. _______ However, riding bikes saves money and time for most people. 6. _______ Besides these two advantages, riding bikes is also effective way 7. _______ to keep fit for those working in offices or lacking of exercise. 8. _______ Many people believed that cars are more comfortable and faster 9. _______ than bikes, but bikes will remain importantly in our daily life. 10. _______ Ⅱ. 书面表达 近年来，食品安全问题在校园内外时有发生；你校上周就发生了一起食物中毒事件，两名学生在校外吃了一种油炸食品而引起胃痛。请你以李华的名义用英文给某英语报社编辑写一封信，谈谈你对这一现象的看法。 词数：100左右, 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 内容必须包括： １. 有些商家只顾赚钱，无视人们的健康和安全； ２. 学生应尽量在校园内吃饭，不要到校外乱吃； ３. 为了防止类似事件发生， 提出你的建议。 Dear Editor, Last week, two students of our school suffered from stomach ache because they ate some poisonous fried food outside campus. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 答案解析 Ⅰ. 1. 【解析】called前加is “被叫做”，表被动，前面缺少系动词。 2. 【解析】what→whichwhich引导非限制性定语从句。3. 【解析】reason→reasonsreason“原因”，为可数名词，其前有some，要用复数。 4. 【解析】comparing→compared co