2011寒假返校考书面表达-cc.pptVIP

假如你叫李华，你们学校最近开展了一次创建“平安校园”的活动。请你用用英语写一篇短文，谈谈创建“平安校园”活动的重要性。短文应包括以下内容： 增强安全意识的重要性； 2. 在不同场合均要注意安全（如在交通中、在运动中、在同学间发生矛盾时等）; 3. 将活动转化成全体师生的实际行动。 注意：1、根据以上内容写一篇短文，可适当 增加细节以使行文连贯； 2、词数120左右 Recently our school has carried out the “safety at school” activity aimed at making our campus a safe place to stay on. _____ 思路点拨 Para 1 增强安全意识的重要性 Para 2 叙述在几种不同场合要注意的安全 事项 Para3(Para 3) 将活动转化为全体师生的 实际行动。 Useful expressions and structures promote/ raise the awareness of safety in different situations/ on various occasions cross the street do sports quarrel with classmates put … into practice Action speaks louder than words. Easier said than done. It’s of vital/ great importance to … attach importance to … obey the rules; watch out for warm up first remain calm It’s high time that we did sth. Only when/ if we do sth can we … 高分范文 Recently our school has carried out the “safety at school” activity aimed at making our campus a safe place to stay on. There is no denying that safety plays an important part in our daily life. （简明扼要点出重要性，但还可适当展开些。） I consider this as indeed a good practice, which will keep us aware that safety should always come first in our daily life, whether when we stay at school or outside it. （本句使用动词短语consider…as, keep+符合 宾语，短语come first, which引导的定 语从句，whether…or结构，when引导 的时间状语从句。） We should be more cautious in different situations. We should obey the traffic rules when crossing the road. When we are doing sports, we should attach importance to the safety and avoid being hurt. Furthermore, when we get into trouble with our classmates, we should remain calm and avoid any form of fighting, which may only bring suffering and pain to us mentally and physically. (运用状语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词、以及副词 mentally，physically的使用均是亮点） As far as I am concerned, I feel all the students and teachers should work hard and creatively to keep the “safety at school” activi