2010双学位语法5 error analysis(杜).pptVIP

Class practice: 作文批改练习1: Population Explosion Yesterday Today tomorrow Population Explosion 作文批改练习1: Population explosion The problems creating by population explosion are more and more serious with the developing of society. First, the population explosion leads to the lake of sources. The rapid increase in population causes a shortage of food and water, food and water is man’s basic needs. Second, the population explosion leads to difficult of employment. The choice of finding a work reduces with the raise of population. The more difficult finding work is, the more purpose people have. So the society turns to unquiet and dangerous. Third, the population explosion leads to kinds of problems of society. For a developing country, the much population is a heavy burden. The government must spend much time and energy to solve people’s basic living, for example clothing, food, housing and transportation. It has hindered the development of something. It’s very important for us how a developing country solves the problems creating by population explosion. We must keep the basic national policy — family planning. 网硕08级 修改稿 Population Explosion The problems created by population explosion are more and more serious with the development of society. First, the population explosion leads to the lack of sources (good topic sentence). The rapid growth in population causes a shortage of food and water, although food and water is man’s basic needs. Second, the population explosion leads to difficulties of employment (good topic sentence). The choice of finding jobs reduces with the rise of population. The more difficulty in finding a job, the less happiness people have. So the society turns to unquiet and even dangerous. Third, the populat