高考英语复习：作文训练.pptVIP

* 高 考 快 递 NMET 书面表达评分标准： 第五档(很好) (21-25分) 完全完成了试题规定的要求。 —覆盖所有的内容要点。 —应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 —语法结构和词汇方面有些错误，但为尽力使用较复杂 结构和较高级词汇所致，具有较强的语言运用能力。 —有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 一、适当地使用一些单词、词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采，丰富语气的表现力。 1.A new building is being built in our school. 2. He pretended not to see the pretty girl. hear what I said. He turned a blind eye to the pretty girl. a deaf ear to what I said. A new building is under construction in our school. Writing beautiful sentences 3. It is raining heavily. 4. The PRC was founded in the year 1949. It is raining cats and dogs. The year 1949 saw the foundation of the PRC. 二、尽量避免过多地重复使用某一单词。 1.I like reading while he likes playing football. 2. When summer comes, the day is getting longer and longer, and the night is getting shorter and shorter. I like reading while he enjoys playing football. When summer comes, the day is getting longer and longer, and the night shorter and shorter. Hardworking and careful, the girl passed the test. It’s I who hit him in the face. How glad I’m that you have made so much progress. 三、可适当地打破常规，用一些倒装句、强调句或感叹句,可以为文意的表达增添一点新意。 1. The girl was hardworking and careful, and she passed the test. 2. I hit him in the face. 3. I am glad that you have made so much progress. 四、使用主从复合句、分词、不定式等来代替简单句，能使书面表达行文更加流畅有力。 He lay on the grass, counting the stars in the sky. In order to pass the entrance examination, we are studying hard. He lay on the grass, counting the stars in the sky. 1. He was very humorous. We all like to play with him. 2. We are studying hard in order to pass the entrance examination. 3. He lay on the grass and counted the stars in the sky. 五、改变句子开头方式，适当地把一些成份提前位于句子的开头，使整个句子读起来跌宕起伏，增加书面表达的表现力。 Between the two buildings stood a temple, in which an old monk lived. On the surface of the river is floating the remain