2012年湖北高考英语作文评析及今后教学建议.pptVIP

2008年湖北高考英语作文试题评析及今后教学建议 08年湖北高考英语作文试题评析 08年湖北高考英语作文试题及评价 08年湖北高考英语学科作文评卷情况 学生答题常见错误 今后高中英语教学之我见 高考作文试题 书面表达(满分25分) 假设你是卜曼宜,你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机.因有质量问题,要求该公司更换.请根据下列要点,用英文写一封电子邮件. 1.问题: 手机不响铃,不能发短信; 该产品已售完,无法更换; 型号新,无配件,无法维修. 2.要求: 公司应尽快予以更换. 注意:1.词数为100左右; 2.参考词汇: 配件 3.电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好.(不计入你所写词数) 4.已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡. 评分原则 本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分. 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分.由于本次写作内容已明确给出，因此评分档次的确定应侧重于语言的表达. 词数少于80和多于120的,从总分中减去2分. 评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点,应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性,上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英,美拼写及词汇均可接受。 如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次. Possible version Dear Sir, I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan,P.R.China. Ten days after that,it didn’t ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller,but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. Later I went to the repairman. He said since it was a new model in China,it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that. How can I wait that long? Therefore, I require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month. Thank you for your consideration. Sincerely yours 档次的给分范围和要求 第五档(很好):(21-25分) 要点完整，表达清楚，无重大语法错误.完全完成了试题规定的任务. -----覆盖所有内容要点. -----应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 -----语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力. -----有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑. 完全达到了预期的写作目的. Range finders The mobile phone can neither ring nor send messages. This really brings me a lot of troubles. So I contacted with your company. But the staff told me that the products had been sold out so they couldn’t change a new one for me. They felt sorry for me and suggested me to have it repaired. Unfortunately,the type of the mobile phone is so new that the repairman said he