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2011年12月 作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. I’ve doneit hundreds of times.” You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180. 审题思路： 作文谈论的是成功与意志之间的关系； 重点：成功与意志的关系，即意志对于成功至关重要； 依据材料来分析问题，要在评论幽默的话的基础上，对观点进行论证； 既要言简意赅，又要充分论证观点，注意字数限制。 写作提纲： 评述幽默的话，引出话题：意志坚强是取得成功的必备条件（essential） 论证关系： 1. 坚强的意志有助于应对困难、挑战 2. 坚强的意志有助于抵挡各种诱惑 点题收尾 范文： Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will There is a widespread humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. I’ve done it hundreds of times.” Funny as it is, the saying ironically reflects the fact that strong will is the most essential quality for anyone that wants to achieve success. 大学英语四级考试作文常用句型: 12.表示让步关系 1） While it may be more convenient to possess a car，it is also expensive and troublesome at times. 2） Although I do not earn a great deal of money for this job，the pleasure I receive from the work makes it worthwhile. 大学英语四级考试作文常用句型: 13.表示因果或前提关系 1） Because of (owning to) the pressure（压力）of examinations， many students are left with little or no free time. 2） Perhaps its because few of us know how to accept compliments（赞扬）gracefully. 3） That is why housework is considered as such a dreary grind（乏味的苦差事）。 4） The reason for this is that 大学英语四级考试作文常用句型: 14.表示存在的问题 1）One of the greatest problems facing the 21st century will be what to do with all the rubbish produced in the world. 2） To travel abroad is a desire shared by many people，but few can afford to do it. 3） Cheating is now considered to be a major problem in colleges and universities. 4） Many people find it harder and harder to keep up with the radical changes that characterize our time. 5） At first thought， the problem seems far too involved （复杂），but it can certai