改错突破.ppt

Error Correction 改错突破 Checklist 缺词/多词 名词：数；可数性 形容/副词：形式/级 近义 搭配 时态/语态 动词 虚拟语气 非谓语动词 As/like结构 11. 定语从句的关系词 12. 前后照应 主谓一致 时态一致 c. 指代一致 d. 修辞一致 13. 逻辑关系： 连词/连接性副词 反义词 其它 1 缺词/多词 缺漏及赘述错误主要表现为漏掉介词、代词、关系词、冠词、连词等或重复意义相同或相近的词语以及出现两个主语等。 单数可数名词一般前应有冠词，但有些固定搭配中不用冠词 Dishwashers and washing machines do jobs that were once done by the hand. by (the) hand ? by hand 1 缺词/多词 不及物动词作谓语的关系代词前的介词 I suddenly realized that my own parents are the ones whom I can rely. (on) whom 不及物动词后接宾语应添加介词 But perhaps we should look at both sides of the coin before arriving hasty conclusions. This leads changes in the way of life. arriving (at) / leads (to) 固定搭配中是否缺介词，注意隔离修饰 In every home a stereo or television will fill the rooms sound. fill the rooms (with) sound 短语中是否漏词 句子结构是否完整 In the nineteenth century, farm work and life were not much changed from that they had been in the old days. That?what （原从句缺少宾语） 定语从句中是否多了主语和宾语 More examples We have to make clear to each worker that everybody must observe these rules． make? make it 宾语为动词不定式或从句时，必须在动词与宾语补足语之间加上形式宾语it。 Though we have known great deal about space，we still have a lot to learn. great deal ?a great deal (修饰不可数名词) The songs sounded via radios in restaurants，from cars passing on the highways and shoeshine(擦皮鞋) parlors． ? and (in) shoeshine parlors 此处应是与前面词组in restaurants和from cars并列的介词短语 Both natural and synthetic man-made rubber are of little value in their raw state． ?去掉synthetic或man-made Monsoon winds（季风），sometimes masked by other features of the general atmospheric circulation，they are associated with nearly all large continental land masses． ?去掉they 同Monsoon winds重复 2 名词 名词的限定 The day before the speech contest English teacher… my可数名词前通常要加修饰语。此句虽然有English，但指代不明。根据上下文，加上my比较贴切。 名词可数与不可数的误用  Too much tests are disadvantage for students’ study. （误） In modern society, people are under various pressures（误） 名词的单复数 1)…and asked me lots of question. ? Questions “question”为可数名词，在lots of后面，应加-s。 2)We stu