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参考范文??? In recent years many Chinese people like to celebrate western festivals. Even some yongsters are paying （1①）as great attention to Christmas （1②）as our Spring Festival.（2①） In addition, other western festivals, like April Fool’s day and Valentine’s Day, are very popular among Chinese people.??? （3）Many reasons contribute to this phenomenon. Among them, relaxing and comfortable atmosphere from western festivals plays a critical role.(2②) Moreover, more and more Chinese people begin to learn English,（4） which provides them with more chances（5） to be exposed to western culture and festivals. （2③）Besides, many businessmen desperately try to boost the atmosphere of foreign festivals to attract more customers.??? （6）As far as I am concerned, our paying too much attention to western festibals will（7） bring some side effects. The popularity of western festivals（8） to some extent has influence our traditions. （2④）Therefore, I suggest that people should（9①） not（10） be immersed too much in the western festivals （9②）but ignore Chinese traditional festivals. 点评??? （1） 意为“或...一样”，同级比较??? （2） 衔接词语使文章条例清晰、意思连贯。??? （3） 益处原因重用句式??? （4） Which引导非限制性定于从句。????（5） 意为“暴露于”。????（6） 用于引出个人观点。?????7） 意为“带来负面影响”????（8） 意为“在某种程度上????（9） 意为“不是......而是.....”，连接并列结构。??? （10） 意为“过分沉浸在...中”。???3. 对策方法类作文结构?????? 对策方法类作文一般需要考生描述提纲中所反映的问题，说明问题的危害和解决问题的必要性，然后针对该问题提出应对策略或解决方法。??? 例：Directions: For this part, your are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic of Getting to Know the World outside the Campus. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:????? 1. 大学生了解社会的必要性。?????? 2. 了解社会的途径（大众传媒、社会服务等）.?????? 3. 你打算怎么做。?????? 结构公式陈列?????? 第一段 提出问题?????? 1.提出问题。2.问题的重要性或危害性。3.Besides/additionally,进一步阐述问题的重要性或危害。4.Therefor/No doubt, it is very important/necessary/urgent for问题涉及的对象to learn how to解决该问题 第一段 提出问题????? 1. 主题句：概括提出问题。????? 2. 扩展句一：指出问题的严重性或危害性。????? 3. 扩展句二：进一步阐述问题的重要性或危害性。????? 4. 结尾句