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二、城市体验 审题注意事项：北京十分美丽 游客十分满意 立意原由：带某人参观/游览北京 事件开始：带某人去某地 1）时间状语+ I took sb. to sp…who came to China for the first time. 2)时间状语+ I acted as a guide,showing sb. around the most famous scenic spots景点 in Beijing,such as the Great Wall and the Bird’s Nest. 3)在某地集合： We will meet/gather +地点状语+时间状语and set off by bus. 开始游览： 1）第一个景点： a:Having been told about the history of the Great Wall,sb was amazed at this world wonder世界奇观. b.The first place we will visit is the world famous spot. 2)第二个景点： a:After two hours there,we will leave for… b:The afternoon tour will begin from the Summer Palace at about 2:00 pm. c:In the evening，we will watch a wonderful Beijing opera. 3)心情体会： a: He was struck给…以(深刻)印象 by the beauty of the Great Wall.So I took photos for him,which would be a good memory for him. b: wherever he went,he had some photos taken to help him memorize this unforgettable trip to China. c: At the top,sb. was interested in the activity of doing sth. d: When you are standing on the wall,you will feel amazed at this man-made wonder on earth. e: Tom can take a boat to enjoy the beautiful scenery in the garden and feel free to look around. f: You will experience a real Chinese culture. 注意：拍照是为了纪念。 take photos to memorize/be a memory. 游览结束： a: Both the Great Wall and the Chinese people impressed him deeply. b. When the time came for us to say goodbye,I gave sb.sth as a souvenir/gift. c.After the show/visiting,sb.expressed one’s thanks to sb. Possible version Good evening,ladies and gentlemen, My name is Li Hua.I have the honour of being your guide tomorrow.Now I’d like to give you a brief introduction to our tour. We’ll meet at the school gate at 8:00am and set off by bus.As the old Chinese saying goes所言,“He who does not reach the Great Wall 定从is not a true man.” The first place we will visit is the World famous spot.When you are standing on the wall,you will feel amazed at this man-made wonder on earth.After two hours there,we