2014届河南省郑州市高考英语一轮训练：短文改错、书面表达12（附参考范文）.docVIP

郑州市 2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（12）附参考范文 When I was a child, my mom was pushed me to study hard，1.________ hoping I could get a chance to go to college. I experience2.________ pressure for the first time. I did that my mom expected3.________ because I didnt want to let her off. I was born to a poor4.________ peasant family, but I really knew life was not easy. All the5.________ things my mother did was the result of her hope that I could6.________ lead better life in the future. As the saying goes, “No pains7.________ no gains.”I was finally able to meet my mother expectations and8.________ have a chance to go to college. Thanks to my mothers push and the 9.________ pressure, I made it. Now, I no longer think pressure is a good thing.10.________ 答案与解析： 1．去掉第二个was　此处不用被动语态，故was多余。 2．experience→experienced　此处应用一般过去时态，与全文时态保持一致。 3．that→what　这里用what引导宾语从句并在从句中作宾语，that没有这种用法。 4．off→down　结合上下文可知此处意为“我不想让她失望”，故应用let sb. down表示“让某人失望”。 5．but→and或so　此处应为顺承关系而非转折关系，故将but改为and或so。 6．was→were　此处主语为all the things，故应用were。 7．better前加a　lead a better life表示“过一种更好的生活”。 8．mother→mothers　此处表示“达到了妈妈的期望”，故应用其所有格形式。 9．√ 10．good→bad　根据上文可知此处是指“我不再认为压力是一件坏事”，故应将good改为bad。 ************************************************************结束 请你根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈诚信(honesty)的作用。 Honesty means always telling the truth and never cheating.Honesty is a kind of courage and responsibility，an invisible power and wealth.Honesty wins trust，respect and friendship.So it pays to be honest. 注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语； ②内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例； ③文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称； ④词数为120左右。 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ______________