unit 4作文讲解：比较与对照.doc

比较与对照 比较和对照是认识事物的逻辑方法。比较的目的在于揭示两个 整体比较 将双方情况按一定次序，先集中写一方的几个方面，然后对应地A1A2A3——B1B2B3。此法适 请看下面范文： Directions：For this part，you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Reading Selectively Or Extensively? You should write at least 12o words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below： (1)有人认为读书要有选择 (2)有人认为应当博览群书 (3)我的看法 Reading Selectively Or Extensively? (1)When asked whether we should read selectively or extensively, people give different answers. (2)Some people think we should read selectively. (3)They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published every day. (4)It is impossible for us to read all the books. (5)Besides, they hold there are as many good books as there are bad books．(6)Good books can give us pleasure and knowledge，while bad books can only lead us astray．(7)Since we can’t read all the books, and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively． (8)But others may not agree．(9)They emphasize that today’s society is not what it used to be．(10)If we want to be successful, we must read widely and acquire knowledge in both natural science and humanities．(11)They also maintain that reading extensively can help to enlarge our view and grasp the general knowledge in different fields．(12)If a man knows much in one field but little in others, he may not be of great use to the society．(13)Since we must have a wide range of knowledge, we must read extensively． (1 4)In my opinion，we should read extensively first and then read selectively and dig into the subject we want to specialize in． (1999年6月六级试题) 点评： 1．结构分析 引言段是一个主从复合句，从句开门见山引出被比较的对象 句子讨论了读书要有选择的理由，有力的支持了第二句，第二个正文段转入了对“应当博览群书”的讨论，第八句概述了应当博览群书，接着作者提出了应当博览群书的两个理由，并逐一对其进行了具体说明，这些句子都有力地说明了第八句。结尾段表明了作者的态度—— 在博览群书的基础上来有选择性的阅读自己专业的书籍。从以上分析我们可以看到本文结构严谨，具有很强的说服力，值得考生效仿。 2．语言特色 (1)第一句用的是when引出的简约状语从句，显示出句式的多样性，其主句是一种表达人们有不同看法的句式，所以本句颇具特色，值得考生模仿。 (2)本文中值得考生注意的语言亮点是选词的多样性，在表达“认为”时，恐怕大