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安徽省巢湖市春晖中学2012届高考英语考前冲刺精品讲义外教旁批写作（十四） 林宏的笔友莉莉今年夏天将来沪旅游。林宏去信表示欢迎，并准备去机场迎接。还告诉她上海有不少值得游玩的地方，他将陪同参观旅游。(用书信体写) 学生习作·外教批改 Dear lily：1Lily，2 I’m very glad that you’ll_have_a_trip you are coming3 to Shanghai this summer.I can’t wait to see meet4 you at the airport and show you around Shanghai. As we all know，Shanghai is the biggest city in China.Especially In these recent years，5 many great changes have taken place in Shanghai.She is a sea of which_absorbs6 different cultures and customs and_develops_her_own_spirits，yet has developed her own very unique identity. Jinmao Tower is one of Shanghai’s mos