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MBA作文讲座 幅：150/100字 　　达不到字数要求的，要酌情扣1-5 布局：3-5段式 　　只写一段为0-4分，只写两段0-9分 评分标准（5个模块评分，平均半分钟一份卷） 结构、内容、语言：3段，长短句结合，一定难度的词汇和短语，少词汇语法错误 卷面书写工整：心情一好分数就不会低 篇幅一定要不长不短 2分－ 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。（即表达得一塌糊涂） 5分－ 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。（即表达得糊里糊涂） 8分－ 基本切题。 有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。（即表达得勉勉强强） 11分－ 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。（即表达得清清楚楚） 14分－ 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。（即表达得漂漂亮亮） 例如： 1） 有人认为机会是极少的 2） 有人认为机会人人都有 3） 我的看法 Sample 1 　　As to the opportunity, there is two different opinions: first, someone think opportunity is little in their life. Secondly, someone consider that opportunity is existing everywhere everybody has some kinds of chance. According to my life experiment and knowledge I agree with the second idea. There is chance for everyone in some unexpected case. But if you has no preparing for it, the opportunity will lose. Those who have many preparation and much knowledge, and some good virtue, may I quip the opportunity firmly. For example, two men are appealing for a job in a company, and there is only one vacant job for the only one of the two men. How, the two man has an opportunity to get the job but the boss certainly would accept the good one. 　　So I think the opportunity is existing to every one, but more opportunity is belongs to who has knowledge, experience, encourage and confident. 　　该篇文章条理不清，思想紊乱，语言支离破碎，几乎没有正确的句子，得2分。 Sample 2 　　People have different views on opportunity. Some think that there are few opportunities for them in the world, while others hold that everybody will have some kind of chances in his or her life. As far as I am concerned, I am for/prefer the latter. People who claim that they dont have good luck may be those who are not able to take chances. Maybe they fail to recognize opportunities even when they are in front of them. However, wise men can seek opportunities rather than wait for chances to appear. ……　　So we can conclude that everybody has the opportunity to succeed, but it is u