英语写作训练(上课)1.ppt

写一完整的句子 写一个完整的句子 句子的分类 简单句: 只包含一个主谓结构的句子. 并列句: 主谓结构+ 连词(and, but, so, or……) +主谓结构 (或更多的主谓结构) 复合句: 引导词+主谓结构, 主谓结构 (从句) (主句) 五种基本的简单句 并列句 1. 用连词/副词 (and, but , so, for, or , not only…but also, either…or, neither…nor, while, both…and, however, therefore…) 2. 用 “ ; ” 3. 用 “ ; + adv ” 复合句 复合句里包含两个或更多的主谓结构, 其中有一个主谓结构为句子的主体称为主句，另一个／些主谓结构为从句，他（们）只能充当句子的某一（些）成分，,如: 主语, 宾语, 表语, 同位语, 定语, 状语等. 根据他们在句子中的功能分别称为主语从句, 宾语从句, 表语从句, 同位语从句, 定语从句, 状语从句等. 判断下面句子属于哪种复合句 1) When we shall have our sports meeting is still a question. 2) The letter says that they are leaving on Friday. 3)That’s what they should do. 4) We expressed the hope that they would come and visit China again. 5) This is the very dictionary that I am looking for. 6) As time went on, Einstein’s theory proved to be correct. 句子的连贯 Faulty: A man is judged not only by what he says but also by his deeds. Faulty: The idea he mentioned at first sounded good. 连贯性的要求是：句子前后之间要有照应，有衔接，思想的表达应该有序，清楚．句子与句子之间的过渡要符合逻辑，不能造成歧义或矛盾． 句子的简洁 １．文字简洁. 试比较下列改写的句子. Do you know the man who is speaking at the meeting? Look out for cars while you are crossing the street? 2.避免使用同义词重复.(如下面的这些句子, 划线部分重复, 应删掉). 1).He is blind in both eyes. He is blind in the left eye. 2).In my opinion, I think your plan is feasible. 3).The desk is round in shape and red in color. 4).I shall accompany my mother by going with her to the market. 练习:改写下列句子, 使其更简洁 1. He gave many reasons for the failure, but the reasons he gave were not convincing. 2. The Great Wall, which has a history of more than 2000 years, is one of the world heritages. 练习:改写下列句子, 使其更简洁 3. He attended the party though he was badly ill. 4. Nie Er, who is the composer of the National Anthem for the People’s Republic of China, was born in Yunnan in February 1912. 练习:改写下列句子, 使其更简洁 8. Do you know the girl who is dressed in red? Do you know the girl _____________. 9. The professor walked into the classroom and he carried a ba