作文赏析（要点全,过度好）.doc

作文赏析（要点全，过度好） 一.（2012作文）随着网络技术的不断发展，人们传递情感的方式也在不断变化。假如你叫王强，上周你就“使用纸质卡片还是电子卡片？”在班级展开了一项调查。请你给China Daily 报社写一封信，介绍此次调查的结果并发表你的观点。 约30% 的同学认为 约70% 的同学认为 你的看法 使用纸质卡片： 手工制作、表达真情 携带方便、便于保存3.。 使用电子卡片： 信息量大、传递快捷 节约纸张、利于环保3…… 1. …… 2. …… （至少2条） I am writing to tell you about the survey I’ve made on “Using paper cards or e-cards?” in our class. 1）About 30% of the students want to use paper cards. 2）First of all, they are made by hand and they can express/show people’s real feelings. 3）Second, they are easy to take and can be kept for long. 4）Third, people can read them without computers. 5）However, around 70% of the students prefer to use e-cards. 6）For one thing, e-cards can carry lots of information and people can send them quickly.8） For another thing, using e-cards can save paper so that our environment can be protected well. 9）What’s more, people can make various designs they like. 10）I think we’d better use e-cards more to save natural resources.11） But on some particular occasion, we can also use paper cards to show our real feelings. Yours sincerely 二 每年3月22日是“世界水日(World Water Day)”，今年“世界水日”你们学校开展了一些活动，呼吁人们保护水资源。假如你是校通讯员，请根据下面提示写一篇短文，介绍这次活动并谈谈你自己的感受。 活动内容[来源:学#科#网Z#X#X#K] 短剧表演，告诉人们“2013世界水日”的主题是“水合作”； 演讲比赛，号召人们节约用水； 张贴海报，宣传世界水日； 你自己的感受 …… （至少2点） By doing this, we’ve learned more about World Water Day. I think all these activities are helpful and meaningful. We students should protect water resources from our own behavior. In some way, to protect water resources is to protect our earth. 三 光盘活动 Recently, nearly 26 restaurants in Nanjing have joined the “Clearing Your Plate” campaign（活动） against wasting food by offering smaller dishes. I believe it is meaningful /necessary/important for us to take an active part in this activity. It is a waste of food and money if we order too much food. Meanwhile, the environment will be polluted by the wasted food. Also, eating too much is bad for our health. We should take action to support the campai