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写作常见错误 And 和 but — About fifty feet away I saw a buck deer running for safety and so I kneeled on my right knee and then I brought the rifle to my right shoulder. He was still running, so I fired one shot at him, but I missed, but he stopped and looked at me, and then I had a much better target to shoot at. 要修改这个句子，就要去掉不必要的并列连词，将次要信息以主从关系表达。上句可改为： — About fifty feet away I saw a buck deer running for safety. Kneeling on my right knee and bringing the rifle to my right shoulder, I fired once, but missed. He stopped to look at me, providing a much better target. 译文：大约在五十尺之外，我看见一头牡鹿在往安全的地方跑。我右腿跪下，拿出步枪架在右肩上，发射了一次，但没打中。它停了下来朝我看，这给了我一次更好的瞄准机会。 过多地使用并列连词（像and, but, so, then等）会造成冗赘和千篇一律。过多地使用并列结构也无法明确各个信息之间的确切关系，因为每个信息看起来都同等重要。 英语写作常见错误 一．不一致（Disagreements） 所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包括了数的不一致，时态不一致及代词不一致等．? When one?have?money, he?can?do?what?he?want?to. 本句是典型的主谓不一致． 改为：　Once?one?has?money , he?can?do?what?he?wants?(to?do). 二、修饰语错位（Misplaced?Modifiers） 英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化． I?believe?I?can?do?it?well?and?I?will?betterknow?the?world?outside?the campus. better位置不当，应置于句末． 三、句子不完整（Sentence?Fragments） There?are?many?ways?to?know?the?society. For?example?by?TV, radio, newspaper?and?so?on. 本句后半部分“for?example?by?TV,radio,newspaper?and?so?on?.”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句． There?are?many?ways?to?know?the society, for?example, by?TV, radio?, and?newspaper. 四、悬垂修饰语（Dangling?Modifiers） 所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清． 例如：At?the?age?of?ten,?my?grandfather?died. 这句中“at?the?age?of?ten”只点出十岁时，但没有说明“谁”十岁时．按一般推理不可能是my?grandfather,?如果把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点，全句就不那么费解了． When?I?was?ten,?my?grandfather?died. . To?do?well?in?college,?good?grades?are?essential. 句中不定式短语?“to?do?well?in?college”?的逻辑主语不清楚． 改为： To?do?well?in?college,?a?student?needs?good?grades. 五、词性误用(Misuse?of?Parts?of?Speech) “词性误用”常表现为：介词当动词用；形容词当副词用；名词当动词用等． None?can?negative?the?importance?of money. negative?是形容词，误作动词。 改为： None?can?deny?the?importance?of?money. 六、指代不清(Ambiguous?Reference?of?Pronouns) 指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者先后所用