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2008年12月六级作文题 ??? ??? How to improve students mental health??? ??? 1、大学生的心理健康十分重要??? ??? 2、因此，学校可以......??? ??? 3、我们自己应当...... ?Nowadays,college student’s mental health has aroused a public concern,because students’ mental health is as significant as their academic capacity. Without healthy psychology college student will never lead a happy life, let alone finish their study and create their splendid future. Obviously, proper measures can be taken to prevent the problems in our university. To begin with,more opportunities should be offered for students to relax themselves, after all there are many pressures such as the study ,love or family burden for our college students . What’s more, more mental health classes can be opened to carry the healthy and optimistic life value. Of course, our college students also can adopt some effective measures to relieve ourselves. For example, whenever you encounter some problems,talking to your friends or your parents is a wise choice to release your pressure or pain. If you really get into trouble, another way is to consult the psychological expert, because they can come up with a solution to help you. 总评：六级作文其实不需要太多的高级词汇，因为高级词汇你真正在考试的时候是想不出来的。还不如在文章的层次方面，句式方面稍下功夫，再加上几个固定搭配（最地道，最强大）就完全搞定了 思路分析： ?第一段：第一句现状+原因，大学生健康已经引起了广泛关注，因为心理健康和学术能力一样重要。第二句：拟无论证，如果没有健康的心理，学生无法快乐生活，更不用说完成学术学习更不用说迎接美好未来 第二段：第一句：总写 大学可以采取措施来防止心理问题? 第二句：第一种措施 提供更多的放松的机会，毕竟大学生确实有比如 学习，爱情，家庭负担方面的压力。第三句 学校可以开设心理健康课程来传播正确的人生观和乐观的生活态度 第三段：第一句：总写 大学生也可以采取措施自我保护，第二句，第一种方式：倾诉????? 第三句 如果真的已经有心里健康问题的，可以咨询心理专家来解决。 2009.06? On the Importance of a Name 　1.有人认为名字很重要，　2.也有人认为无关紧要，　3.我认为 ?Some people place much emphasis on the importance on a name. And to them, a good name means success or fortune. For example, when they choose the day in which their shop is open, 8 is a fortunate number because they equate 8 to wealth. Furthermore, they even deem that a good name will bring their children the splendid future, so they spare no effort to contemplate their children’ name. Othe