英语强化训练-作文-实践篇.pptVIP

英语强化训练－作文-实践篇 主讲：刘彬 习作欣赏与分析 例1：Directions：For this part，you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The World Is Getting Smaller and Smaller. You should base your composition on the outline（given in Chinese）below： 1. 现代化的交通工具越来越发达。 2. 人与人之间的交往越来越频繁。 3. 结论。 此题是英文题目、中文提纲，属于议论文体，要求考生就世界变得越来越小进行阐述最后得出结论。以下为五篇不同档次的作文，如果你为阅卷人，请你已与上面给出的四级考试作文评分原则及评分标准，为这五篇作文打分。请写出你的印象奖励分（具体得分）及你的得分依据。实际得分依据及实际得分在五篇样卷后。 Sample 1 Following the society developing。The vihiew are divelopping。 Some of it ，such as，bus, airport, they have a speed of 1—10 hundred per an hour. So we will arrive at Washington in several hours if we are by air. Other hand. The people on the earth are becaming activily, Some of them are more and more like to visit the famous view, or the best pace. Some of them visit the place for business. So people are understand the world and the geography of the world. There are better and better between people and people. A country people have relation in the ther country.Between country and country.There have a better relate.So following the world development The traffic will became better and better more and more country have shipness. So there have a famous word: The world is getting smaller and smaller. Sample 2 The earth on today is the earth on yesterday. Why do we say that the world is getting smaller and smaller? The first reson. The car and train. Plane make it easily that we go to anywhere in the world. We can be able to get to New York by air from ShangHai In several hours. A handred years ago, the trip would cost two months. We can arrival in Beijing by train from Shang Hai in one day. A few handred years ago, the trip would cost us several months. The second reason. We are working and studing with many people. We connect with more people, because we need more help than before our gra